All Comments on 'The Second Laptop'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Well written

It was a very good read with just the right amount of perversion.

rightbankrightbankabout 9 years ago
and

the moms have it

live4thebjlive4thebjalmost 9 years ago
I am confused

I thought this was to give insight to the bowl story. Nonetheless it was a hot story but as you were going over and over again about the dreams I wanted to read more reality. So I skipped a lot of the dream parts for dreaming about incest isn't as hot as doing incest. ****

TSreaderTSreaderover 8 years ago
Very good!

I liked this one a lot! Thank you!

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I write for myself, I hope you enjoy my stories, many of which are from my life experiences. But if you don't enjoy them I don't really mind, as I write for myself. Having said that, the number of comments and PM's received, have been much appreciated by me. I'm not good at r...