All Comments on 'The Second Worst Day Of My Life'

Realistic tale. Good writing. Good dialogue. Terrible situation. I gave you 100 but I wouldn't say I loved it. Too depressing for that.<P>

But hey, thanks for sharing?

Well written and emotional, don't understand why she was having dinner, drinking and dancing with the asshole and his wife was o.k. with it, no need for a romantic nite for a update. Thanks for the story.

there are so many missing words, misused words, incomplete sentences, - that I can't give full marks to this otherwise well-written story.

Get an editor or at least read the story yourself a few times before posting.

A very stupid wife and sister. I would do the same as the husband. Cut your losses and move on. Thanks slirpuff.

A decent story, but too many holes and overall it felt incomplete. He never confronted her with the romantic nature of the meetings, which certainly she should have explained. You took the short way out on the meeting with the son. I am one reader that does not mind a story not filling in all the blanks and leaving it to the reader, but this one just left too many important loose ends. The lack of editing, though generally not a huge issue for me, was distracting. Thanks for writing and for a good story.

easy to say that there was nothing more going on but I agree

with others and him, from what he saw, their mutual feelings were more than just casual encounters. Having led to believe that this guy's wife was aware of it and approved iof theri nights out, maybe he should just dig a bit deeper and try to find out what really happended, if only for his peace of mind. Cause the trust issue will always remain.

You come up with some very interesting plots. We all make mistakes, but try to reduce the number. Things like "sorted lies" should be caught. Your imagination is a pleasure!

First let me say that I liked the story as I do most of your work. It's a depressing tale, but most stories about a cheating, lying spouse are. A few things that stand out are the romantic atmosphere of the updates for Bill. i believe that Sue is using the updates to relive her youth and was cheating even if there was no sex.Also I find it hard to believe that Bill's wife would condone this type of meeting, although I applaud her for not wanting to hurt the boy or his home, if that was the reason. The technical mistakes can be annoying but overlooked somewhat. Apparently those mistakes aren't so bad that it keeps me or others from reading your stories. I believe this story has more life in it and would like to see a follow up. Thanks for your hard work and fertile mind, keep it up.

....romantic angle big deal.Would like to have seen husband confront wife immediately,trashing shit and not confronting is actually wimping out.Also this "trust" thing that everyone keeps talking about needs to be developed.I've been on this planet long enough to know every couple, everyone has their secrets. And sometimes it's best for all concerned that it stay that way.That said,everyone has the right to know their bio rents.Just was reunited with my B-mom this summer after 53 years.Not surprised to be given proof that it was my B-dad that was the lying cheating slut.In a patriarchal society it will usually be the males that fuck up.Think about that.-pistolpackinpete

As usual, well written but unbelievable story. That a wife would be stupid enough to have sex with old boy friend on their romantic breakup and end up with his son as a result, but never tell husband or son about biological father and then meet with old boyfriend annually to review son's life. Even more fantastic is husbands sister covering up for her at annual meetings with old boy friend. great writing but strange story.

60 year old George

He only has her version of how long this has been going on. The person who signed the contract can tell him how long the "Carols" have been coming in, that should help. For all he knows she continued fucking the guy the entire time she was dating him, while engaged to him (she confirmed), and while married to him. He has in reality raised a bastard and the father needs to be sued for seventeen years child support and medical payments including the pregnancy. In addition he needs to sue him for alienation of affection. His sister is dirt and needs to be swept under a rug. He needs to remove he from his life completely and have her move out of the home. She is a lying slut and needs to be on the street, the son is old enough to know whether or not he wants to be with his "father", his mother, or his biological father. His parents and the wife's parents both need to know all of the facts and it made clear, there will be no reconciliation with either the exwife or the exsister. And then he needs to find a woman worthy of his love.

Great story but incomplete! Can the husband believe that there was no sex in the encounters? How did the Son act when finding out that his dad was not the biological father?

Still a great story plot, but leaves, in my opinion, to much unsaid/unknown.

Well written. Given all you laid out, most men would already be in prison waiting for the lethal injection. He actualy responded like he was trying to keep it reasonable. I mean if you have any emotions at all you're going to have some contrempts.

Thank you for writing

I <b>HATE</b>you for leaving it <b>IMCOMPLETE</b> YES, this story is <b>IMCOMPLETE</b> and needs another chapter.

for once you didnt puss out because its clear he did the right thing in leaving her. and no, it wasnt a bitter thing that he wanted his son to know who his biological father was, although i agree that just because because they're not blood related doesnt mean they're not family. she says they didnt have sex, then what was with her actions? inapropiate touching, dancing, laughing as if they were lovers, all of is cheating. im sorry but i find it hard to believe they didnt have sex, especially after she admitted that even though she dumped bill to be with him, she had pity sex with bill at least once. so lets be clear, its not male pride or him being stubborn, its him being true to himself and acting like a man, trust is everything in a marriage and not only did she not trust him, she brought his sister into it. i mean, good god, she found out kevin wasnt his, lied about that, and then spent several weekends acting like another mans lover/wife ( his sister even said exactly how he would react and everyone is surprised by his actions!!) and the dumb bitch doesnt get his actions? man, this story really got my involved, well dones slirpuff! however, the only downside is that its left unfinished. yea, it could end on that hell of a cliffhanger, but it would be so much better if you wrote another chp. maybe not involving another woman, but him moving on to the best of his ability. thanks man

She says it's been only a year, but the guy told him "They come here a couple of times a year ..." That means it's been going on more than one year.

How did Bill find Out ? I'm quessing she told him

but Why ?

I do admit that I do not understand the desire to go out dancing and dining. The hotel manager clearly felt that they were bound together. The question of telling people who the natural father is may be medically relevant but there is the problem that they were allready planning to get married when she conceived the child with the old boy friend.

The first one informed of the problem should have been the husband. In fact she started the whole business because she could not hold her liquor and now she goes out, dances and drinks with guy??? Bill`s wife being OK with this seems highly unlikely.

that to do with erotic writing ? it was short, nice told, good story concerning the plot up to the point that it is unfinished and the biggest lack here again it's just sad not more not less. published in a wrong place. you should at least post it under non-erotic. otherwise please explain where I missed the single erotic point here.

She lies to her husband but not her ex-lover... never would happen that way... they are just meeting to update about the son, but you have them laughing dancing as if they were on a date... once again... you mixing-up your story line... they're either on a date or they are having a meeting... a wife who feels tremendously guilty about the meeting in the first place would not be laughing and dancing... and why would they be booked as MR AND MRS... ummm, they wouldn't even be booked into the room, they were there for dinner and home by 11:30.... she tells the sister??? what??? that is just crap... a sister is going to fuck over her brother and parents for her sister-in-law?? Without some justification... like she hates her brother, you have no reason for this weird behavoir, so it just annoys your readers. Slirpuff, I don't even get the impression that you read your own story after writing it??

the romantic side of their meetings. I also have a VERY BIG problem with her reaction to finding that her husband wasn't the sperm donor. Three husband should have some serious questions about his marriage.

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I've just about decided that there are two sorts of people those who have experienced cheating spouses and those who have not. I can see how that experience would color your view. How it would make you assume things like "She'd been cheating the whole time."

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However, there are also strong clues that it isn't the case. First and most important is his sister. Not that any of that matters. This is a very interesting story, and I agree that it demands another chapter. I've been married over 40 years... and while we've never had to deal with adultery, we've had plenty of other things. I guess my experience is that problems can be solved as long as the guilty party repents. Repentance is the key without it problems shouldn't be.

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In this story, I see a lot of stupidity, including his. I don't know if the marriage can or even should be saved... but I hate to see people throw a marriage away without at least seeing if there's an alternative.

Surely this story is not complete. There is too much unresolved drama to leave to the reader.

Half a story.

I agree,the story left the reader hanging.Also there appears to be more to the updates than just bringing Bill up to date on his son's life. She seems to have an agenda that she is keeping a secret. An additional chapter could bring all of what is going on to light. You have a great ability to come up with interesting stories.

The marriage is toast and here is why. Sue finds out more than a year ago that Steve is not Kevin's father and she had been with only one other person. STOP! She knows that Bill is the father so why do she track him down, ask for a DNA sample and tell him that Kevin is his son? Was there some medical emergency which required that Bill be contacted? No! So Sue created the situation which brought Bill back into their lives. If someone threatens to disrupt your life do you go dancing, laughing and partying with that person at an exclusive resort? Do you meet with an ex-boyfriend the night before your special weekend with your husband? Rick the resort manager said two interesting thing (1) "...most people get here by 7:00 and my wife normally has everyone settled into their rooms by 8:30 and (2) "Our restaurant stays open until 8:00..." Steve saw Sue and Bill dance up to 10 pm. According to Sue she was just giving Bill an update on Kevin during these meetings. She had every chance to explain the dining and dancing with Bill but she did not do so. If the meeting was to be all about Kevin she could have met Bill during lunch. No, this was about Sue reliving those college days when she had two men on the string. If she had not fuck Bill it was only a matter of time she would do so (she had done it before). She was wined and dined by Bill (probably fucked) and she could fantasize about him while she is fucking Steve. What is puzzling is Cindy's and Ruth's involvement. There is something wrong with Sister Cindy's logic that they should not tell Steve because "he will disown her and Kevin" but it is OK for Sue and Bill to get away the night before their special weekend to have dinner, dancing etc. We only have Bill's word on what Ruth knew but if his marriage was at stake why did Sue have to keep meeting him? The bottom line is if what you think it is based upon what you saw then it is probably true. By the way at 16 Kevin can handle the fact that some else can be his biological father. The only mistake Steve made was going to jail over this affair. Outstanding story - Thanks!

The title says SECOND worst day. So, obvious question, what was the worst day?? Is it yet to come? Giving the author the benefit of the doubt, lets examine the "inconsistencies" brought out by others here.

Time line: "they come here a couple times a year"; "His wife has known for a year"; Sue started this "a while ago"; tests were done last January/February; Cindy has always been her companion for the first night of the weekend. So, what do we make of all this? How about this: She has been going on these nights out for "a while" and sister is there to cover but also to make sure they don't go too far. The dancing and romancing makes her horny, hence the need to have an extended time with Steve after the "dates" in order to have something in mind to enable her to resist the temptation to give in to the moment with Bill. Last year Sue discovered that Kevin is Bill's kid and breaks the news to Cindy and then to Bill. Bill tells his wife he has a son and wants to keep up with him through meetings with Sue (note - not overnights, but just evenings). Ruth doesn't want Sue to come to their house (as Bill expected) so he is now free to continue the assignations without worrying about his wife finding out. Possibility two: Cindy is meeting someone else as well and they are using the weekends to cover for each other - something is going on with both girls and the extended time together with Steve is to "atone" for Sue's infidelity.

Sometimes the author doesn't have to spell everything out, but can leave things to the imagination (or speculation) of the readers. This is short fiction, after all! The possibility of a second chapter is there (given the title) but it doesn't follow from the current status of characters or plot. Isaac

the worst day was finding his wife was having an affair. Yes and affair. Get it together. She was sneaking around meeting the guy that fucked her when she was engaged and got her pregnant for her marriage. She has been meeting him over what is months if not years. The owner of the place said they had been coning in for years. He also indicated that most of the time the place was down by 830 and everyone was in their rooms. And she didnt get home til 1130 my goodness what went on during those hours. Oh yes I remember she was briefing him on his son and showing him pictures. Time for the Sherman talk, War is Hell, burn it to the ground. And for the guy talking about faithful wife for 40 years and no cheating, and what evidence actually proves that is the case? As opposed to what evidence proves it isnt. The wife in this story is a round heeled slut from the get go, any other thought isnt worth thinking.

The lack of follow through by Steve hurts the story. Given how Steve is developed as a saavy Business contract negotiator the questions left unanswered REALLY hurt the story.

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WHY does Sue HAVE to tell Bill about Kevins life at fancy romantic high class resort? why not at Lunch?

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Supposedly Bill's wife knows about Bill being the Biological father of Kevin.. REALLY? and how do we KNOW that? through Sue and cindy two known lying devious bitches said so.

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OK I would check into that.

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Even if Bill's wife does know all about Kevin.... Does she know about the Dinner get Meetings between Bill and Sue?

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What is the emotional and psychological connection between Sue's long weekend of sex with Steve and the secret meetings with Bill?

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Lastly the decision to NOT tell Steve the truth about Kevin makes NO sense. NONE. ZERO.

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Bill has known for a year.

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Bill's wife has known for a year.

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Cindy has known for a year

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of course Sue has known for a year

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Cindy's Husband -- David- PROBABLY knows

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Steve had NO clue. Bill Cindy and Sue decided to NOT tell Steve. Almost like a conspiracy.

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How is that defensible?

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<b>It STRONGLY looks like Cindy and Sue saw Bill's demand as the Biological father as way of LEGITIMATIZING these dinner romantic meetings. It was a cover story.

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By NOT telling Steve as soon she (Sue) found out risked a Much bigger expolsion later on and it makes NO sense

...unless one sees the way Sue and Cindy manipulated the chain of events.

short. Lots of development at the front of the story to build the characters and the plot. Only to be left short with a talk about the bird and bees. This one could use a second chapter to show the aftermath of a worst day in the life.

Well written story. alot of unanswered questions about Bill's wife, does she really know about her husbands other child. Does she really alot these evening dinners with the mother of the child. If so doesn't she suspect that something more than dinner can happen. How about the sister Cindy covering up for the sister in law. Alot of unanswered questions. Nicely done, but left me wanting more. Thanks for sharing.

Slirpuff,

I liked it and I even liked the ending. But, this ending begs for a further story. However, the usual grief and then divorce would be sort of mundane right, hence why you stopped?

But, there is a young man in this who just might need his story told. Think about it.

Friday was the second worst day, when he saw his wife with Bill. The worst was the day she told him Kevin was NOT his son. The story has not ended, cause Steve is only 39,time to start over. Good story, very entertaining.

dont leave us hangin needs a chapter 2.

good story...if you are trying to prove what a fucking asshole this jerkwad really is. He jumps to conculusions based on a momentary sighting, he refuses to talk to anyone, disowns his only sister, destroys private property based on an offense THAT DIDN'T HAPPEN! She would be better off without this fucking maniac. He doesn't need a good lawyer, he needs some anger fucking management.

Good One(you´re improving a lot...), but needs a second chapter.

He has his own set of principals to live by and his wife was a lying slut even before they were married.Kick the bitch to the curb and get on with his life. The real looser was the kid, knowing now his dad isn't really his dad. Old Bill would have a lot of back child support to pay, plus anything he could sue him for.

Everyone knew but him and there was no need for the drinking and dancing that went on, there was more going on with Bill than she wanted to admit, even to herself. If I was ole Bill I would watch my ass, cause everything has changed. How to fuck up a marriage.

Oh please, he didn't act all out. He heard her side and confirmed his beliefs. 1. If they were supposed to be just meetings to catch up on Kevin's life, WHY THE DINNER AND DANCING ALWAYS BEFORE THE SPECIAL WEEKENDS? If she only had two relationships the time Kevin was conceived, WHY DID SHE HAD TO PROVE IT WAS THE OTHER GUY???

I'm in suspense, great "whorror" story. Hope he doesn't wimp out and take the slut back.

Needs a ending

several ending could be in store 1) Blackmail charges 2) The son confronts the bio dad 3) the parents of Steve get involved in the resolve 4) Sue confesses of screwing Bill for years.... So many endings are at hand

Nothing makes sense by the end of the story. None of the characters are believable. The husband sees them dancing and then will not talk to anyone... disowns his sister, property damage and he doesn't know what really happened. The sister makes no sense... neither does the wife... its a crazy mess that even a next chapter will have a hard time putting together into something coherent.

Any one person could be as crazy as the characters in the story, but not all of them at once. Gave you a 0 for the story, but 50 overall because the writing was good.

You're a good writer. You have a nice ear for dialogue. Not sure why it's posted on Literotica.

You really get the emotions going. However, a trend I really don't care for but seems to be gaining popularity is when the author just chops off their story and calls it "the end". When asked, the author usually replies that the reader can come to their own conclusions. With some people I would say they lacked the skills to write a proper ending but having read some of your other stories I know that's not the case here. Most (good) writers are pretty good observers of behavior and being such realize that things said in the heat of the moment can change and often do once the hurt and anger subsides. All the other components needed for a good story were present except the ending. So, with that in mind I deducted 25% for no ending. Let's face it you cut the story off with a lame line about the birds and the bees. The readers didn't even get to see Kevin's reaction. If your going to start something, finish it. Don't leave it for someone else to finish. At least, that's what I was taught. OH.... and it really wasn't apparent as to what his worst day of his life was.

but as did the previous post I had to deduct as the story didn't seem finished. Obviously he should divorce her as she has lied to him for so long he can never trust anything she says. The dinner, dancing and drinks seem like overkill based on the scenario that she discribed. Unfortunately, for her, she has lied to him for so long that even if she wasn't sleeping with Bill her husband has no way to know if she's telling the truth or not. Even if she wasn't sleeping with him, dating him while lying to her husband is still cheating. I'd like to see a second chapter where he divorces her, sues bill for back child support, and starts dating some hottie from his office who's 10 years younger than his wife, more attractive and better in bed. It'd also be nice if this ruins his son's relationship with his mother so he comes to live with his dad and dad's new girlfriend. Oh, also does his sister end up divorced? After all she's lying to her husband about 'girl's night out,' is she cheating to? How can he trust what she says after she's lied for a year? Not to be vindictive, but let's face it, actions have consequences and if someone is demonstrably dishonest in one aspect of their lives then how can they be trusted to be honest in other aspects? All that aside, other than ending to soon the story was very well written as always. I hope to see chapter 2 soon.

you start a story and don't finish it.you got two stories submitted today and still this story is hanging.

I agree with the commentator who said this guy needs anger management counseling and with the commentator who noticed the misspelled word. It's "quite", not "quiet". It's "dessert", not "desert". It's "they're", not "there". I spotted several more that should be fixed, too. As for the wife picking a night out with anyone other than her husband on the night before their "date weekend", I found that quite illogical. Sorry, but this is not one of your better works.

By making one spelling error in the very <b>last line</b> of the story you undid the enjoyment I had sustained up until that point. Your proofreading should always put special emphasis on the openings and closings of your stories; these are the places where errors will most likely occur.

There's no closure.

There 'ought to be a second chapter of fallout; a lpot needed in these "you're not the father" type of LW stories.

Otherwise good.

If you can't figure out how to contract "you are" to you're and pick up your other typos, just give up writing. Poor grammar spoils the story. You've got enough imagination to put a story together; now make it readable.

This paragraph made no sense:

"He wanted to meet Kevin and talk to him but I refused. I made a deal with him to keep him in the shadows. I would meet him a couple of times a year and give him a full update including pictures and such to keep him quiet. Steve he was all excited about having a boy because he and his wife had two girls. Bill told his wife about Kevin and she made him promise not to come forward and tell Kevin who he really was if he wanted to stay married to her." Why didn't the husband specifically ask her at this point, if she was just meeting this guy to provide photos and an update concerning the son, why was it necessary for them to meet in a romantic setting, with dinner, dancing, laughing, etc? Obviously the wife wanted to spend time with this guy, was enjoying being with him, having him place his hands on her while dancing, etc. And if the other guy's wife had already made him promise not to tell the boy, and threatened divorce if he did, then why was it necessary for the main character's wife to meet this guy at all? The husband was justified in leaving his wife, since she was clearly cheating on him, in an emotional sense if not a physical sense.

this story needs a chapter 2 to finish it off.

stopping the story half way finish.

just another piece shit ..................

Why did she tell Kevin anything? Could have kept the knowledge to herself; or better yet - as the husband suggested - tell him and let them deal with the consequences. If she really worried about being exposed in the most incriminating way, "updating" Kevin while wining and dining in a public place proves that she was not the sharpest tool in the tool shed...

You already said all there was to say. She was a cheating, lying bitch right from Jump Street. You told it the only way it could be told and have your protagonist maintain his pride and dignity.

Real people, real emotional conflict and a believable ending. All written brilliantly - what more could we ask?

Steve is a hot-headed, self important jerk, but the story is, unfortunately, believable.

From a chick perspective he behaved outrageously, from a guy's perspective he hit a home run. He managed to mostly control his violence and place honesty above convenience. Liars and slackers can't understand but principled people get it.

Really liked the story. Question to Slirpuff,"Do you purposely leave out some obvious detail to tease the reader or is it just inexperience?"

If the wife really loved Steve, why tell Bill about Kevin in the first place? Why go dancing etc with good old Bill if she loves her husband? Does Ruth really know what is going on before the car got trashed? What does Kevin think after the bit more than 'Birds and Bees' talk? All that said, Steve showed great self control in only trashing the car and not hunting Bill down. No way should the bitch wife be forgiven - she is a slut and that is a proven fact.

A very good story with a very accurate Title. Would like to have seen a little more depth but then that takes me back to my original question.

Cheers

what's the first?

to those saying he should forgive and forget, you guys dont have a backbone! why should he trust a woman who goes back and forth between men like a yo-yo? marriage and commitment are all about there being no competition! clearly she's going to fuck her other lover sooner or later. even if she doesn't, she ruined what was an otherwise beautiful relationship and ruined his faith in having his own kid. you guys with your "natural laws of fucking around" should piss off. if you want to be treated like a human then you should have principles unlike animals!

understand the treatment of the wife ,but not family ,forgive ,but not forget.Give her the oppurtunity to make it up to you.

Sister and wife started with their deception, and discovery is evitable, just a matter of timing. First, second, whatever day, that was NOT a good day.

Things changed for them all, and bill pays for his part?

Gotta be better after this episode?

The story was vey good, but a very bad ending....

is not always a good defense. TK U MLJ LV NV

I swear you hate men at least did when you wrote this pile of crap. Not only is his wife secretly meeting(sleeping?) with an ex boyfriend but his sister hates him so much that she's helping her do it, but then it turns out that his whole life has been wasted because his son isn't even his.

Absolute shit and you should be ashamed that you wrote this drivel the only positive is that you at least learned how to write positive stories because the only realistic conclusion to this story would be a triple homicide.

I can't critique the wife. This was a judgement call. She is in a REALLY tough spot.

Yes, I'm normally a TTB but listen: She didn't know! She's been a good and faithful wife (assuming she's telling the truth) for 16 years and THIS crap comes up! Something that will break something she wants and values even if she hadn't done anything else wrong? There is no 'win' here!

Is he overreacting? Ugh. I want to say yes...but...He could save this marriage if he wanted to, but at this point, it's his choice. He only has her word they weren't fucking and she's already been caught in one lie.

The one I really dislike is Cindy. She was the worst person in the story.

She said " I thought it was a great idea and when I supplied his blood type information from my file at home I noticed something."

Obviously, Kevin's blood type was neither hers nor Steve's. I suppose it's possible she never made the connection before, but I doubt it.

Slirpuff, I have read all of your stories and like most of them. I like your concise writing style. I'm not a grammar and spelling nazi so I won't repeat what other what other commenters have written. I do have one piece of constructive ctiticism that I haven't seen in any of the comments I've read. You tend to break words up. Examples are all right instead of alright, all ways instead of always, fore play instead of foreplay, on line instead of online. This often changes the meaning of the word. Fortunately, english is redundant enough so I know what you meant by the context.

She should have sat down with her husband the moment she found out about Kevin. It would have been tough because not only was Kevin not his but it meant she cheated on him 17 years ago. Still, 17 more and honest years - a chance.

Big, biggest mistake was agreeing to meet secretly with Bill, cuddle, dance, dine and have fun while hiding out and - they are registered as the Carols'?

The last year killed it. Would he still love her - yes. Would he ever trust her again - No. He would live in hurt, despair and anger but this guy would not go back.

Sad, but she screwed up royally - Twice...maybe more, we'll never know about her being Mrs. Carol at the Inn?

Thanks for the good story.

Somehow, I've never read this one before. It was a cool idea, and I empathised with the hubby's plight (and felt for the wife, some, too) but it didn't work for me as well as it might have.

The wife did a lot of objectionable stuff, here. But, the real offense was not keeping the reality of the son's bio-daddy from hubby (What's the point, besides hurting her husband, in telling him then?). Nor was it in her having a couple of semi-annual get-togethers with her old boyfried/son's bio-daddy; assuming that dinner and dancing was all there was to it (big assumption, I know). Nor was it in keeping those meetings secret from hubby-not appropriate, but again, a little deception to keep a hurtful truth from hubby seems forgivable. The deal-breaker wasn't even in her cheating on future-hubby after she broke it off with her old boyfriend and agreed to be exclusive with her future hubby. It was wrong, but it was a last-hurrah, goodbye fuck to an old boyfriend, and she wasn't married yet. No, the real deal-breaker offense was that she got preganant, and KNEW that the child could be her old boyfriends. But, rather than 'take care of it,' or come clean to hubby, she lies, or lies by ommission, and their entire marriage is built on that lie. They only had the one kid together. Now, he is a 39-year-old man who has just discovered that he doesn't have a bio-son at all. That's a big deal. That was a fundamental, and on-going betrayal.

That hubby wants a divorce for the recent deceptions and semi-annual 'dinner-dates', rather than for the fundamental betrayal doesn't make sense to me. Pretty sure wife wasn't fucking around on him-the other man's wife knew of their get-togethers, and wife presumably never came home with sloppy seconds, etc. Yes, there was deception, but the reasons for the deception should be taken into account.

There were other things that didn't make sense. Why take a 16 year old boy in for DNA testing? The reason you do that for kids is in case of abduction, etc. A 16 year old boy is unlikely to be abducted, and unlikely to need DNA testing in any case (not likely to change physically very much after that age-which is the point of the testing for kids). The story would have worked better if she had found out when she had him tested at age 10 or so, and then the deceptions and 'dates' would have gone on longer, too (i.e., more reason to leave her). Also, a DNA test, by itself, would not tell wife that hubby isn't the father. It would have worked better if there was a younger sibling, and the tests showed they didn't share the same father, etc. Setting that aside, why would wife have told her old flame that her son was his? What was the upside in that decision? Answer: none, there is only downside, as wife realized when the bio-dad first wanted to meet the son, and then later pressured her into the dinner-dates. And, assuming she did meet with the bio-dad and his wife, why in hell would the wife agree to their semi-annual 'dates'? Couldn't a couple of photos and an email or phone call a couple times a year work just as well? Finally, and this is a quibble, why would wife schedule a 'girls night out' on the Friday of her semi-annual 'date weekend' with hubby? So, all those things sort of left me thinking that this good story idea could have been much better executed.

how many of us 'DAD" are out there???

A DNA comparison between Hubby and Kevin would absolutely determine if Hubby was the sperm-donor. This was reportedly done after a blood-typing on Kevin strongly suggested that Hubby was not the inseminator! (Sweety presumably already knew Hubby's blood-type!)

Excellent because the way it ended. Steve had no choice. Cindy must have had an inkling that something was up because the blood type didn't match. The DNA test brought the indiscretion in full view. By sneaking around for a full year she sealed her own fate. Steve did what he had to do. No wimp here. Time to move on.

Am I to believe that your only fans are the kick em to the curb crowd. Or perhaps the others just did not even bother commenting on this story. Lets list the facts as you wrote them, not how all here seem to want to believe or imagine.

First, she made a mistake when she was breaking up with one boyfriend and moving to another. I can see how when she got pregnant it never even crossed her mind that it might be from the one, last time with her ex. That is what she indicated. She did not set out to pull one over on her husband. For most of their marriage she thought the boy was her husband's son.

Next, she went to his sister, who was evidently one of her close friends. This was the sister who had known her husband all of his life. She had wanted to come clean but the sister convinced her that he would leave them and that she should take the path she ended up taking.

Finally, he caught her on a date with a guy that he hated. He saw them laugh and dance together. He did not see them kiss or play grab ass. He certainly did not see them have sex. Nothing that was written indicated that it was a truly romantic evening. She was going to be home before midnight to play with her husband for heaven's sake. Would she have sex with another man right before what was supposed to happen that weekend. I doubt it.

Up until that moment, he felt he had the perfect marriage. Folks, contrary to what many of you must believe, those are really few and far between. The fact that he was willing to throw it all away due to these circumstances was just unbelievable to me.

Should he have been angry? Yes. Should he have extracted a pound of flesh, requiring his wife to suck up to him for a period of time to make up for her mistakes? Yes. But to throw something really good away for this?

I guess in the end he just proved his sister right.

(Now I will sit back and wait for the hate mail.)

It is obvious that you either are not married or must have a lie detector system. In a marriage the only lies allowed are when your wife asks if the dress makes her look too bit. My ex lied her ass off about everything, but in a way that was not a lie unless you were very specific. Exp. Have you slept with Gary? No. Did you and Gary every have your bare genitals touching or inside each other? But we never slept, not a wink.

The wife lies for their entire marriage about having sex with her old boyfriend and then finds years later that he impregnated her and for 17 years she lies to her husband. In addition she meets with her old boyfriend twice a year for dinner and dancing with the excuse she is passing current events of his bastard child. Plus she talks her husband's sister into covering for each time she has these dates meaning that she lies for over a year too.What the stupid wife doesn't admit to is that her meetings with her old boyfriend have turned into mutually shared enjoyment. Why would meetings to share information about his kid turn into a very nice dinner, she wears a sexy dress and of course they must dance. They were acting like they were a couple but because of her stupidity she hadn't a clue mainly because she lied to herself about what she and he were really doing. It always bothers me when one spouse all by their own actions destroys a good marriage.

He has no choice. He has to divorce the bitch. There is no such thing as a good bye fuck. She cucked him before they were even married. He did what he had to do.

Seems you always bend over backwards for a wife who lies. Trust is a key component of any marriage, by not divulging such significant information as the child he raised not being of his blood she destroyed a foundation. Destroy one foundation and the entire thing becomes unstable at best. She had over a year to try to talk to him and feel him out but decided to follow his sisters idiotic advice.

to BetterEnding:

You don't understand???!?? whats not to understand.

Wining, dining, and dancing with the "ex" IS cheating.

Don't forget what the owner said... they were there regularly under the "ex"s name.

PLUS she cheated on him from the get-go!

It is pure BS that she wouldn't have suspected that the other guy may be the father.

No-one is that stupid.

(And if she really is that dumb... well that's reason enough by itself to kick her to the curb.)

Cheating ho deserved far worse than she got.

Keep up the great work 5 *****

She felt compelled to tell Bill about Kevin? Why?

She chose to cover it all up with lies rather than tell him the truth. How could he possibly go on trusting her? She gave into her Ex´s demand of meeting him personally and in private for dancing, wine and a nice time, for christ sake. Her Ex had proved not beeing reasonable or trustworthy, otherwise he wouldn´t have insisted on meeting her again and again. Only a matter of time until he would have tried talking her into further fun - knowing, his own wife was just a stupid idiot.Very nice story...4 Stars. Please more of this sort!

Saying they come here a couple of times a year and knowing them as mr and mrs and their name means it happened more than one year.

As mentioned she did not have to tell him.

She did not need a special dance floor dry fuck with him.

She fucking knew she was knocked up almost as soon as it happened - every woman does.

A lying cheating slut is a lying cheating slut.

She is history as a wife and expensive to get rid of so treat her like a whore you fuck and sell her to your friends too.

And the sister did not need to be there at all - she is a cheater too.

You need a new editor! FFS it's terrible if Wolfvixen is supposed to have fixed it all...

Maybe the biggest overreaction in any story that I've ever read on Literotica -- and no sex!

was to write the comment the last anon moron made.

I caught the same thing "cantbuymy" caught; they've been coming a couple of times a year and the register as a married couple? Just for dinner, strange hotel. She is the worst in many ways; and his sister is a bitch too!

Hey this is special! She gets a little 1 on 1 with her babydadddy - register at the hotel with him. Makes sure nice and fresh for baby daddy but hubby gets Friday night sloppy seconds. And babydaddy is so happy to have a son, now all he has to do is pay the lawsuit for raising him. Now that is precious! 5

Here is my flash ending. Kev, you are not my son! You mother whored herself out to a former boyfriend and he knocked her up when she was supposed to be with me. I know this hurts you but I can’t lie to you. I am going into court to have Bill listed as your father. I am divorcing your mother and filing a lawsuit against Bill and his wife, who knew that your mother was meeting him during her “Girls Night Out” with my Ex-sister and your Ex-aunt, Cindy. She and Bill have been having more time together during those nights and Bill’s wife seems to know about it and is ok with it. I know this will hurt you but you are no longer to consider yourself as my son, because I don’t consider you my son any longer. Blame your mother, the whore if you are upset but you are no longer my problem. Bill is happy to finally have a son, so be his son.

I left the house and filed for divorce, moved the court for an order to amend the birth certificate to remove my name from it and adding Bill as the father. I also brought suit for alienation of affection against Cindy, my Ex-sister, as well as Bill and his wife, who knew about their meetings. Then I filed a separate action to recover all costs related to Kevin and surcharge his mother for the fraud she played on me.

Three weeks later a distraught and mentally unbalanced Kevin, with his mother and my Ex-sister went to meet Bill and his wife and two daughters.

Kevin was not happy about the meeting and took my old 45 caliber model 1911. He killed Bill, his two daughters, wife, Cindy and tried to kill my Ex but only managed to put her in an electric wheelchair.

Kevin was sentenced to death but while awaiting his appeal was murdered when a number of gang members tried to rape him and he fought back. They raped him anyway but he died of head injuries suffered during the rape.

At the burial site I walked up to Sue who was sobbing and in the wheel chair and said “Was the good-bye fuck really worth it you whore?”

Now wasn’t that a pleasant little ending?

Don't you just love happy endings; i know i do.

I hate these fucking stories that end this way! Just finish the damn story if your going to fucking write it!!!

women who say they love you, but then lie to you. Burn the whore and her lover.

And the really bad/sad thing is this stuff happens in real life. I've seen it. It completely destroys peoples lives and for what? 15 minutes of sex? What a waste.

I loved your ending can`t.

... in the words of the resort manager " 'That's the Carols. They come here a couple of times a year for dinner and then hit the dance floor.' " There Would have to be more to the story then the wife told. A "couple of times a year" indicates a longer period of time then the whore admitted to, so she is still lying and covering something else up. BURN THE BITCHES, the wife, the sister and the boyfriend, but not the son. Panther Fan.

I take it that you have never lied to a woman once. Not to protect her feelings. Not to get yourself out of a jam. Not because the truth was inconvienient?

And I'm sure that you also have never told a lie to other loved ones like parents, grandparents, siblings, in-laws etc.

Total perfect truth is a very high bar. Make sure you don't hang yourself from it.

Unfortunately she knew there was a chance it was Bill's and she didn't bother to tell him at that time. She was been a lying slut for her whole marriage.

"The Carols" is what the owner said. A romantic dinner a few times a year? How much changes in 4 months? This was not a little lie. They could not meet at Denny's? They needed dinner, drinks, dancing, and pass themselves off as husband and wife during a romantic evening?

They left out how many years the first DNA test was done but it was probably more than 2 years before.

And what is this "good-bye" fuck garbage?

Lying whore and he needs to dump her if only for the lying and romantic dates.

finish the story

Why would she need to have Bill tested if the only over man she ever sleep with was her husband? I must say that I agree with his actions because he couldn't trust his wife or his shitty sister. Hope you finish the story and give him a do over with a decent woman.

We need closure and so does his son. Kevin's reaction to finding he's a bastard son of a scumbag and the resulting conflict could be very hard on poor little "Mama-slut." You could tell the story from Kevin's viewpoint for a fresh take on the price the innocent people pay for another's cheating and lying.