All Comments on 'The Secret Lives of Goddesses 01 Pt. 01'

by GeneraZ

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Wow!

What a great story! I loved the flow and easy to understand pacing. I've come to really like the characters. I hope there will be more!

wet_specialwet_specialalmost 8 years ago
Good stuff

I loved how you built this up and every detail you put into the way they first kissed. Marla was every bit the mature and experienced character, Jessica the innocent prey but by no means a victim. You have talent, I hope you find the inspiration that is evident in these works to tell more stories.

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I've created this account to host my amateur erotic fiction. Someday I might try writing as a profession, but I'll need to build some skills first, so for now I'm cutting my teeth on these stories. I deal almost exclusively with futanari subject matter, and my stories take p...