All Comments on 'The Seduction'
by JenniferO1
- 45 Comments
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoUsually longer stories have long boring stretches, this is easily in the top 10, delicious. I like the teasing and steady buildup.
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoWow! Thank you for taking the time to share your wonderful experience. I'm speechless, and also having a hard time standing up.
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoI loved the tension build up at the end. I was touching myself w/o realizing it......
Gearfinkalmost 18 years agoHey Jen-a-Jennifer!!
I absolutely LOVED the story!! God you've given such depth and interest wrapped around the lustful and enticing interplay of the two lucky players! Thanks for this; I'm a solid fan of this and really look forward to reading so much more of yours.
With care, Gary.
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoAll of your stories are good, but this is one of the very best. I love your style and the rhythm of your writing. I can see why it takes so long for you to produce a story, as the lack of typos and mistakes attest to careful screening and editing.
Top job - keep on doing what you're doing!
Anonymousalmost 18 years agoMy dear, can you write!?! That was one of the most incredible uses of the English language I've cum across in quite some time.
Anonymousalmost 18 years agokeep on writing as often and as much as you want. You have a large and devted following and we certainly don't agree with you that your writing is in ANY way sub-standard.
Anonymousover 17 years agoSimply the most sensual and erotic story that I have read from you! PLEASE keep writing, as I immensely enjoy your style and your incredible sensuality. Thanks so much for sharing (hmm... is there a pun in there..?).
Anonymousover 17 years agoMY HEART RACED THOUGHOUT THE ENTIRE STORY. NORMALLY WHEN I SEE IT IS A LONG STORY, I SKIP ALL THE BORING CRAP. I READ THIS TOP TO BOTTOM AND LOVED EVERY WORD.
Anonymousover 17 years agoOnce again, you've succeeded in keeping me riveted to the screen. Please continue, I love the visuals and feelings you create.
Anonymousover 17 years agoThat was incredibly sexy and satisfying! You've captured the eroticism in flirtation. I am reminded of many happy massage moments! Magnificent!
Anonymousover 17 years agoLonger stories I usually skip. But once I started I could not but to go through and thought may be I should go in between the lines to smell the sex. Vivid description, enjoying.Keep writing and get appreciations Best wishes
Anonymousover 17 years agoNot only is this story erotic and exciting, but its also cute and gives me a warm fuzzy feeling :D I truly enjoyed reading every word of it..
Anonymousover 17 years agoJennifer -- Each time I visit this site, the first thing I do is check if you have posted another story. I am like a teenaged groupie. You are an extremely talented storyteller. PLEASE keep up the great work!
Anonymousover 17 years agoI'm a 23 female, and have an absolutely incredible sex life, but love to get off by myself sometimes, and I think that's the best orgasm I've ever had by myself... I almost cried it was so good. Your story is exactly the kinky sort of thing I like. I love to act naive and innocent and show off sexy parts to men sometimes too, especially when I was younger. You did a great job of making the reader see and feel what was going on. Thank you! Keep writing!
duddle146over 17 years ago*Whew* What a hot story! Jennifer returns with a vengence as she, generates some really hot torrid sexual action, abundant erotic images and some really sultry dialogue. This one ~ you'll not want to miss. Terrific Write! Great Read!
Seniorcitizenover 17 years agoI do not normally read long stories, however this was wonderful. Very sexy and erotic. Everything that 'Literotica' should be.
Keep up the good work
Anonymousover 17 years agoJennifer,I've been reading your stories the last few years and you really are getting better and better at your desciptions,very vivid! I always prefer using my imagination and reading instead of visual images-though this can be nice too.I'm also a painter so your creativity is appreciated - Thomas San Francisco,Ca
Anonymousover 17 years agoFirst of yours I've read-great stuff! Looking forward to reading your others
Anonymousabout 17 years agoHello Jennifer
Your stories are a work of art; you are way above any other author in style, content and sex appeal. Keep up the good work and don’t leave it toooo long for your next adventure.
PS
It would be nice to have a glimpse of your painting style! Anyway all the very best, We all out here are looking forward to your‘next story’
Best regards, Colin.
vestoralmost 17 years agoHi Jenno!
You create an erotic mood, while maintaining 'real life' environs for the reader.
It is fast moving, but lots of hot eroticism to imagine and enjoy.
I am 60yo male. I will be reading more!
Promise!!!
dan
vestoralmost 17 years agoHi Jenno!
You create an erotic mood, while maintaining 'real life' environs for the reader.
It is fast moving, but lots of hot eroticism to imagine and enjoy.
I am 60yo male. I will be reading more!
Promise!!!
dan
RossDanielsalmost 16 years ago. . . buildup I've ever read in a story here on Lit. I understand now why you called it "The Seduction"--you seduced me with your sensual words and drew me into to this amazing adventure. This is the first of your stories I've read, but I'm not going to stop now until I've savored every one. Okay, I'm starting to gush, so I'll stop and just say thanks for a wonderful read.
Anonymousover 15 years agojennifer that yet another hot story...you certainly have a talent.
i love reading your stories for a bit of release..although i dont always last to the end...thnx beautiful
Anonymousalmost 15 years agoI may have only been looking on here for a few months but WOW... favourite story yet!! Immense!
spyyseeabout 14 years agoIt's a shame you stopped writing. We love your stories and your fascination for hung men. Like you, I have the same.
Anonymousalmost 14 years agoi loved your story! first one i have read from you, but i'll be sure to check out the rest asap.
i really enjoyed your writing style :)
the teasing leading up to the moment was brilliant, but i have to say while this story was dirty, hot, and got me off quickly, another word i would have to sum it up with is: sweet.
reddy4241over 13 years agoThis was my first story of yours, that I have read, I enjoyed it immensely, I intend to read the rest very soon. The build-up of tension and teasing was remarkable. Very sexy and hot;
I understand that you have stopped writing, that is a great pity. If you have time or the inclination, please write some more and maybe show us some photos of your painting . Thank you again.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoLove your stories, although they could use some editing. You inspire me to write about my life, which I think could match you partner for partner, experience for experience. Sigh, I don't have the time or energy for such a project- but keep the inspiration coming, and maybe I will someday!
Adam Rightmannabout 12 years agoVery hot, I'm glad Phil got some after all the teasing he got.
OzEliotalmost 10 years agoI've read this a few times. I still think about that shirt. Great escalation. Great teasing.
Raiderangelabout 7 years agoI just love the female perspective. It just so sexy and erotic. I really enjoy your writing.
Anonymousabout 6 years agojennifer , im yet to get through this story without cumming ... such a build up you are a sexy talented woman, and fuck me im horny ...chris xxxx
Anonymousabout 5 years agoYou are officially my favorite author of erotica! The female protagonist is extremely hot, and the feminine perspective is what absolutely makes the story! Brava!
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