All Comments on 'The Seduction of Lori Pt. 10'

This skank is following the scallywag playbook right to the letter. She already decided to lie to her husband constantly, and will soon be putting out for more than one man who couldn't give a shit about her. Duane needs to find him a chippy and get those kids away from that gutter trash ASAP

What did I think of the story, not much!

Mmmm! Xoxo. Love this entire story!!!!

It looks like Duane got his wish. His wife is addicted to black cock. He started it and now he is paying for the consequences. The wife will never be just his. A pity about the kids growing up with a mother addicted to black cock and a weak father who will allow the addiction.

Hope it doesn't go the way you seem to be pointing at.

Because, despite the way the stories are written on here, little white wives losing their shit over big black cocks is a myth. I have had a wife, and two girlfriends who occasionally liked some black loving. They liked the taboo aspect and the color contrast. But, they all said it was like having a decadent dessert. It was delicious, but they wouldn't want a steady diet of it. And, all three played the "I am fertile and you might put a black baby in me" game. Said they got better loving out of it.

I am loving this tale ..... FYI.

These chapters just keep getting better and more thoughtful, complex!

❤️Morgan

Very enjoyable please continue want to see where Lori takes this

Another great chapter and some interesting direction setting. The wake up call for Lori that a co-worker is pregnant and she needs to get on birth control which of course means she needs to have a discussion with her husband. He is definitely going to be struggling with the fact that birth control equals Lori embracing her desire for more interracial sex. Looking forward to the next installment.

The end of a lovely marriage and family.

Good story, but the chapters are just too damn short, and the wait for the next is just dragging this out way too long. You authors forget that most of us are.reading other stories daily too, and if you take too long, I tend to find another series to folllow.before you finish yours. It's frustrating as a reader.

Hope Marcus going to give her some coffee soon without Duane being any wiser, Keep up the great work!

I continue to think this is a superb story! We’ll written with an occasional twist! Can’t wait for part 11…

Amazing. Keep going. I've enjoy each new chapter more than the last. I can't wait to see how Lori, Duane, and Ryan (and Marcus?) continue to develop as they explore more of their desires. Just great stuff!!!

Lori needs her own baby bump!

The plot thickens and it goes to show a chapter doesn't have to be full of sex to be sexy loved it as usual thanks again please continue can't wait for what you come up with next

Time for Ryan to put a baby into Lori.

This is great……she cheated when sucked first load out of Ryan & she cheated when she sucked a second load out of him. Will Marcus get the whole floor knocked?? Will she actually tell Duane she needs Marcus to scratch the itch deep in her pussy?? Will she let herself get knocked with a black baby?? Will Duane get over her kissing her lovers?? Most important……Will her marriage survive??? Please keep this going for a few more chapters.

Nice chapter disregard the trolls, in the end its your story and how and when you put them up is your ball game.

More Ryan and Lori texts, sexts, surprise parking garage visits should follow. Lori, should keep strong standoff with ol Marcus, it's got to be killing him, until he just takes command and gets her alone in the hospital elevator for her python feeding.. lol

Another GREAT story. Keep it up.

Thanks everyone for your input - love the positive comments and take the negative and constructive criticism to heart. As I've mentioned before, I'm a new writer so still figuring it out. I have this Lori series and only one other published story but I have another one in the works from when I was 19. Lori was never meant to a series, but everything I've written so far is from my real life events so I'm sharing much more than I ever planned to. And to the anonymous person who said I'm taking too long between chapters, well, you're right, I am. I'm writing as I go and have time. I think in the future, I may consider a different approach and after the Lori series, I'm going to take some time and write an entire event and release it as either one long story or in a couple of chapters, whatever Literotica allows. It might mean that you don't hear from me for a while because I've got two side jobs to pay my rent and food and still interviewing for a big job somewhere.. Looking for opinions here. I'm sure some of you would be happy if I never wrote another word...lol - but that's okay too. Have a wonderful day folks...Ryan

you should be writing for extra income you're that good

For what it's worth, I think you are doing an excellent job with this series. Most of us know and appreciate that it takes time to create a well-written chapter you can be proud of and greatly prefer that to a rushed, run-of-the-mill installment, or worse, the series ending too soon because a few folks whine about it taking too long. Personally, I think the pace is perfect and am happy to find an excellent new chapter popping up every week or two. The product you give is certainly well worth the wait.

Really wonderful series. Hope you continue writing.

This is tory is excellent, outstanding. Lori Tolles is my favorite character these last two decades. Maybe we can visit with Lori again in a new adventure.

Another great chapter. I think what's special about your story is the variety of great sex scenes and insights into the minds of the charakters. So we witness the development of Lori, but also of Duane. These two have a very strong relationship, Lori is widely honest to Duane, however she doesn't tell him everything. Duane initated all this, and now he has to deal with the consequences, but I think he does it an impressive way.

I have to agree. Lori is my wife or the wife I’d love to see her become. Smart, conservative and so sexy!

Okay I don’t rate stories but I’ve been reading this one and it’s good enough to be made into a movie. Dude, you’ve got chops. You should write for a living. Seriously. Keep doing your work and you’ll get there

I think what I love about this author is his “slow burn”. He got me interested with part 1, drew me deeper in part 2 and with the exception of one chapter (forget which one) he seduced not only Lori but me too. I’ve been reading this when the snorer goes to bed haha. Keep us entertained young man.

Sounds like a plan RT. You could also start turning the corner with Lori and taking the story into a "what if" to keep it rolling and keep your readers in the loop. At that point you would have time to work on your new projects. Also think about what you do here, making the many parts into one part uninterrupted and on a platform where you make $. Done right you may find yourself moving up from the puddle jumper to something more flashy with the extra cash flow.

Five stars!!! What’s next??

Another good chapter! My wife and I have skirted around the idea of her taking on a black lover and she actually turned me onto this story. I think in one of the comments, the author said this was a true story. It’s a shame he’s on the east coast. I would love for him to meet my wife and see what happened. Waiting patiently for the rest of the story. Ben

Ryan, Please come to Pennsylvania...I need you! :)

Kris

hope everything is ok and that your well

Wheres chapt 11 ahhh been waiting and anticipating haha

Good morning, everyone... thank you for your kindness and concern. For the record, I'm fine. Like everyone else, I am a real person and have been very busy with two jobs and interviewing for a job with several large companies - it's sort of stressful and I've been doing some traveling as a result of it. I had just gotten my MBA in June and have been somewhat picky about the type of work I'm doing and what I feel is a fair salary for an honest days' work. Maybe I'm being unrealistic, but I feel as though anything worth doing is doing right.

As far as Lori is concerned, I want to try to finish this story with this next chapter (11) - since it really happened, the story has already written itself - it's just a matter of seeing if I have the skills to convey it to you as author to reader in a manner worthy of your attention. I apologize for my delay - several pages are already written, and I'm determined to finish it and get it to the editors to look over sooner than later.

Thank you all for your kind emails and friendliness - thank you to the two of you who preview the writing as it is being written and offering your advice. It is helping me become a better writer!

Be well and have a wonderful day

Ryan.

be picky a job you don't like is as almost as bad as no job at all both bring too much stress . so glad to hear you well good hunting and thanks for the update

RT, as an MBA who has moved up to the top spot in an international company. I'll tell you one simple thing I learned that was my Golden Rule that got me to the top. I learn this in the very first months of the program. Do not get involved in titles, middle management polices but direct your attention to the outside world. In board meetings I never talked about anything but the corporation's advancement in the international market place. Other MBAs that attended such board meetings quickly caught on that I was getting someplace and attention of senior CEOs. Would try and sidetrack me with points of building a strong middle management to support the growing of the corporation. My reply would always be to thank them for such insight and support of my work to secure more market share for the corporation. Personally, I never got sucked into any talk of personalities within the company and never repeated what anyone told me. If people got together for drinks after work, I was always the first to leave. A few drinks can have some people say or do something dumb and I didn't want to be on record as a witness of any of it. Never beat the CEO you play golf with, losing by just a few strokes. Keep losing by a few strokes. Corporate life can be unforgiving, trust yourself.

Ok we have waited long enough where is the next part please

Marcus needs to fuck Lori and Marcus and Ryan need to double team her, that’s what I would love for my wife!

Sorry for the delay folks - it was submitted to the publisher yesterday for review. Assuming there are no issues with it, it should be public in a day or two. Please let me know if you like it.

Ryan

Great series! Keeps my interest!

Great series! You owe us one more chapter. Where the neighbors talk about

Lori fucking a black guy & also about her getting pregnant!