All Comments on 'The Seduction of Louise Ch. 01'

I liked your description of Louise very much.

Hope this goes further. I like big women.

I love large mature women and your description of her is, indeed, very arousing. Even more description would be appreciated as men are definitely very aroused by the visual aspects of a woman's form. I'm looking forward to the next installment.

"Her body shape appeared to be somewhat pear shaped, with seemingly slender shoulders and medium bust . . ."

"I took advantage of the situation and let my eyes drop to her breasts. . . They were extremely large . . . "

Jaymie - -

Great read. Just a little nit pick. You originally described her breasts as a "medium bust." I was disappointed at first, because (IMO) the only saving grace for a plump woman is large breasts.

I was quite surprised, and delighted I may add, to find out they were actually, not medium, but "etremely large."

Great start! I'm glad that Louise's tits were changed from a medium pair to extremely large. I love big boobs! Five stars and a favorite point!

This series of stories is the best I have ever read. I am the fifth feedback on this story. There must be a lot of ignorant people not to appreciate you. I have seen some of others terrible stories with lots of feedback. Its hard to understand.

I like your frankness about yourself, and of course I love her breasts!