All Comments on 'The Sex Shop'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Great, Wants more, more, more.

I love the submissive. I only want more. I really would have liked to see how far Jay could have gone.

JackieJabJackieJabalmost 15 years ago
not bad

couple typos but overall a fun story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Nice start..

..just begs for more chapters. Hope you'll keep it going.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
hmm

i wanna knw wat else he tries...its great...write more...maybe like next time he even try more n put in his dich while doin all dis to her...n hw horny is julie...

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Fucking awesome!

This entry had me dripping wet, wondering what was coming next! I'd love to see more and watch the chapters develop!

-Amanda Jane

shaneeshaneealmost 15 years ago
Sexy! Sexy! Sexy!

What a seduction! Love how what he wants gives her exactly what she needs, craves and enjoys so much - ohhhh and yes the customer is ALWAYS right! Ehmmm! Deliciously spicy!

jkimjkimalmost 15 years ago
Yes please

Yes, Please come back next Thursday!

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