All Comments on 'The Shoplifter'

I loved your story very hot and steamy doesnt drag on like some

Was expecting it to turn out to be the guys wife, and it's a role-play to have fun.

Nice and sharp and easy to read. Good fun

Can you do one on me too? :)

Nice fuck story. A couple of grammar mistakes here and there but it wasn't that distracting.

Wonderful story and I loved the last line :-D

Its a good story, good ending too.

PORN STAR DREAMS.....what else????

very good......

WWWWWWW0000000000WWWWWWWW!!!!!!

iS ALL i HAVE T0 SAY!!

*fanning myself*

wow, I want to shoplift there.

Short and digestible but no less erotic. Thank you!

This one was a lot of fun! Of course the security guy is in potentially FAR more trouble than the shoplifter. VERY easy to catch with a simple tip from a let off scott free shoplifter anonymously. I've seen it happen many times.

Shorter than most of your other works, but they're all great. Always anxious to read more of your work.

Same as too many others.

No originality.

Bill S.

Hmm. I was expecting this to turn out as a nooner visit from his wife.

Very erotic. 5 stars. But the story should have gone on longer. Since the video of the shoplifting was still with the security guy, there was more potentiality of his threatening her, calling her over to a safe place for several weeks of rough all out fucking of all her holes.

Awesome