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by DawnShires

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
That was a short story

The story could have had more....

MaonaighMaonaighover 5 years ago
Promising but...

A well-written story but it promised so much more than it delivered. If you'd develop this into something a good deal longer you could give your readers a very interesting and erotic fantasy tale.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
"Short"cut

It ain't called "short"cut for nothing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
And sweet

I like a one page story! B8

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A lover of strong men, beautiful women, black eyeliner and ALL the coffee. Born and raised in the south, but dreams of discovering a magical world in a cupboard. See more of my work here: https://medium.com/@DawnShires