All Comments on 'The Shy One Ch. 05'

thanks for making the story move forward. seems like they both feel guilty and thought that they were using each other, BUT what they really want is to make love. i wonder when they'll do that? make love and admit that they like each other. i wonder too what their sisters have talked about and are thinking? write more! : D

I just hope this doesn't become some wild orgy with the sisters. Though, it would be interesting if they end up having to deal with some negative repercussions for their risky behavior.

Jeeze, Rob! I mean, yelling at idiots in a horror movies ("Don't turn your back on that shadowy doorway!"), bad plays by baseball players, political hacks saying precisely what I *don't* want to hear...that's OK. But now I'm grumbling at some guy refusing help with his sandwich? Excellent. :) Keep up their frustrating, tentative orbit around each other and what they truly want.

let them find that they really are totally in love with each other.Take away all the guilty feelings,and have them commit themselves to each other......Rich