All Comments on 'The Silken Family Trap Ch. 07'

Sadly, the story was printed out all over the right hand side of the page, so it was virtually unreadable. A shame as it looked as if it was a good story. If you can sort that out, you'd likely get a proper rating.

I cant wait for the next part.I did not see any lay-out problem.

I also saw a layout problem but it seems if it were fixed it would be good.

just save the story as a text file on your computer then you won't have a problem reading it

So I really can't rate you until you geet this thing w/the margins straighted out!