All Comments on 'The Sins of the Fathers Ch. 10'

Stop the teasing and fuck her! We are all dying!

yes i have to say that you do have a way to tees, and you can make some thank that you have had to deal with this. i can say that i can understand how it can be

Give the girl some relief! Have her seduce Jack's friend. Mack's daddy. Have them have some fun. Have Jack find out. Remember she said she wouldn't wait.

You're a teeaaasseeee! But I love it. Where's chapter 11?????

Also, yeah. I hope Jack and Spencer would share Nikki the way they share his wife. Or Nikki and Mac would share Jack. Then later on maybe they could have foursome or something. Oh, that would be great. Dad bestfriends sharing daughters, daughter bestfriends sharing dads. I'm sorry. I hope you don't find me creepy or whatever. It's just that your story turns me on so much.

really loved the blowjob and how well your wrote that into the story

If it is a love story then keep Spence away from Nicole, if it is a stroke story, then by all means have a Spence, Jack, Mackenzie, Nicole orgy, but stop with the moralizing in his head if it is not a love story. I don't think you can have it both ways. I see him making love with his daughter and her drawing Mackenzie into a three way with them. ::shrug:: OMO

It would have been much better if the character of the video game had been kept out of the erotic part.

Write your story your way. You obviously have a gift for this. If the purpose of a story is to make us feel what the characters feel then you have written need to life. This is one of the best things I've read on this site or any other.

Well I liked that you used the game character and the way that you did so was great. That kind of detail makes this much more than a "Daddy got his dick sucked" story.

Also, don't let people rush you. I am enjoying the journey.

lady swallow is a kick ass name

I have read this series I dunno how many times, then lost it for ages, I am certainly glad I found it again it is one of those things that stick in the mind. The way you handle the situations created by the characters. Brilliant . I have certain recollections of scenes to come and look forward to those, or rewrites ? Are they different or the same.

Erotica it most certainly is.

So far each chapter is better than the last. It’s very true to life for a father with daughters.