All Comments on 'The Síochán Ch. 04'

oooh even better then i imagined it would be. they sure are in a twisted "relationship"

is there really anything else left to say ... ?

I love all your stories but this one... this one has a total different feel about it. Even though the characters are non human they've managed to maintain their deep human emotions the turmoil, lust, love, romance, hate, fear....

As a writer you've made me feel all that emotion and more!

Excellent Chapter

How cool is this - Chaos coming up! Loved it!

Great chapter Jaz!!!! Now hurry up and get Nathaniel and Summer back together please!

Typical vampire romance novel crap. Short, mediocre sex scene. I feel like I've read it before... good news, though. You'll probably get published. Congrats.

Can't wait for more, sparks will fly when summer get back to those smug beings! Go Summer!!!!!

a new chapter - thanks so much. I love the way this one is going. Please disregard the comments from anonymous - if they had something worth saying they would not hide behind an anonymous comment. Your work is always wonderful and this is unlike any other vampire story I have read. Please do not let comments like that stop you from continuing to creat such awesome stories for the rest of us.

Your loyal fan, Kate

Dear Anonamous,

Suck it up, Jaz rocks. It's not like she reincarnated the rainbow bright of vampires with 20 year olds playing teens. If you're so great then write and let us critique.

This story just keeps getting better. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Nice chapter, can't wait for the next one. Want to see what Summer/Chaos does, hope it's painful for those jerks.

amazing chapter

Can't wait for the next chapter. They are cold hearted. I'm so glad Summer has some humanity left in her. While I believe in balance, I don't really understand the problems too much good could cause. Maybe you can explain that in a future chapter. I hope Summer gives the Siochan hell before returning to find Nathaniel. Keep the chapters coming!!!

I am so loving this series, its much better and different frm your first piece. Keep up the good work!

I can't wait for next chapter :D

This is a fantastic story! I can't wait for the next chapter, please don't leave us hanging too long :-)

Wow! Quality stuff here. I love the characters and plot, keep it coming =)

This is much better writing that your vampire/werewolf saga. I hope you continue.

Please continue now that worlds has completed, lets see what Chaos does for there world.

Thank you for the entertainment. Mike from Texas

You took this story to a whole new level. Caleb's and Rhianna's story was a GREAT story as were those of all the characters in their world. But this world is so intricate. The Siochan is made up of such complex characters with what they each represent and the Siochan personality mixed together.

I feel so badly for her b/c she really has been used so badly by these people. I don't know how she could possibly forgive them for wanting to kill her and then for how much they are using her to get to Nathaniel. I feel badly for him b/c I am sure it is hurting him to push her away and moreso to cause her pain. The two of them are clearly not made like the others. They don't have that indifference to others feelings.

It really is Summer who causes that in people. She had that effect on Nathaniel even through the scrying pool. It is clear she even changed Lucas. I guess you can certainly say she created chaos in both their worlds, but she also brought out whatever thread of humanity was in both of them. I find it interesting that Nathaniel said she is fully transformed and won't lose that bit of humanity. In the end she will probably pay dearly for that part of herself. I don't see how she'll be able to do her job. I hope they don't turn her into the automatons they are.

Great story!!!

What room did Nathaniel take her to?

I think the sh*t is about to hit the fan, and I can't wait. GO SUMMER

"Nathaniel was right, she wasn't Temperance, she was Chaos. And she was about to unleash her wrath on the cold hearted men who made up the Síochán."

BAD. ASS.

I wonder what else they haven't told the poor girl. Men. =-P

the rules of the universe must be adapted to evolve. TK U MLJ LV NV

I'm with secretito what else have they not told her. She doesn't deserve that life she deserves to be with nathanial. Why do men have to be so cruel

You have such a wonderful imagination. Are the Siochan your House Of Lords, or our Supreme Court? Either way, what a gather of pompous asses. They are so in need of a little feminism. Go girl!

Don't mess with a woman's man!!!!!! Those men are in for a rude awaking, and the joke will be on them!!!!!!!

Hell hath no wrath like a woman scorned!!!

You are just crazy talented! This story may just be the best yet.

There is nothing worse than being manipulated and then realizing that the person you love would sacrifice his soul and love rather than go back unwillingly.

Poor Nathaniel and Summer but watch out boys the wrath of a woman scorned is deadlier than a rattle snake bite!!!

Another brilliant story Jaz congrats

Marvelous ...... If "chaos - summer" could be connected as well to our religious old mens in every religion, so may hate or terrorism could be eliminated, like equally here "summer" hopefully can turn those old mens brains with her chaos ..... Thats a precious big thought behind this tale ....... Really really outstanding 💝💝💝💝💝⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Amazing story!