by DantesCristo
This a great start, you have got to continue this story!!!
No, the 7... hell, the 8! Because 5 does not do it justice.
Well set-up, interesting take on an old premise. But above all, incredibly well-written! If you didn't have an editor on this, you should offer to be an editor for others.
Awesome. I'm looking forward to more. I hope there's real drama and story in the future with the hot sex in this.
This story is so hot it would make a dead man get erect. Scorching hot!! Wow. Just wow. Please. More! I beg you!
Why does everyone have to have a completely unrealistic cock size? 11"? Give me a break.
That one ridicules part is the ONLY thing wrong with your story though.
Don't forget the wife is in the bathroom where the sitter left her shirt.
You're very good. The erotic imagery is perfectly interrupted by occasional humor that actually brings one to chuckles or outright laughter. Emily is a dream! Please tell us about her next visit!!
except the 11 inches cock length, everything was great. when can we have the story of her next visit?