by geronimo_appleby
Thought the writing was great -- very descriptive and the words used seemed to capture the mood. I loved the dp scene at the end. Very hot.
...the last set of comments are right on. Good storyline, well-written story, and nice twist with the DP ... well, actually it was a TP or QP (triple or quadruple) wasn't it? Now this story defines a slut in my mind. Just because a woman wants a little more than usual, maybe she gets a little outside her marriage or she likes to do a little swapping doesn't mean that she's a slut in my mind. This woman, who wanted every cock in sight and not just one way but at least two, that is a slut, a real sexual addict.
I love it. Keep writing.
This hot story would even been better with some nasty Ass to Mouth. The men certainly would be willing to provide her with necessary ass-dipped Meat !