All Comments on 'THE SOT, MAX J, JP, & SAKI (O MY!)'

I'd really appreciate any feedback those who read it can provide; I'd use any such comments to further 'hone' my writings, as long as a comment is CONSTRUCTIVE (not necessarily POSITIVE, simply lacking Hurtful or "Smearing-Type" language; if you have something that may help me improve, please "go to town'...'This Is Crap' doesn't reach that level.) Thank you so much!

I apologize for those; I'll try to do better

Good butt fucking tale..love when a hot soccer bitch gets her pooper wrecked..Need some cigarette smoking in the next story to feed my fetish.. Pass the Butt Butter Please!

I've run out of words to praise your talent Patty P...just...GODDAMN!

So imaginative, descriptions are very vivid, as if you are RIGHT THERE, involved with the sex...HOF

Magnificent!

I alone is enough to blow our minds; the STORIES are the icing on the cake: a multi-layered cake! I'm a FIEND for lesbian sodomy...just luv it

I should have clarified this request; If your ARSE-HOLE 'feedback' is *automatic rating of 1 since there is no # in the title*, or some such, DON'T PRESS the feedback button to waste my time with useless and asinine blather. Just move on to the next smear

that's it...VERY FINE lesbian erotica

And one of my fantasies is to be dominated and fucked by one of my Daughters (or Son). I'm kind of busty, not with the kind of tukus YOU are blessed with, but I'm KILLER in lingerie you describe...UMMMHMMM!

PREACH, Girl! xoxoxo

Based on the comments to this point, I'm on the right track

I've been too busy to visit this site for a few weeks; PLEASANTLY SURPRISED 2 find THIS GEM

re: I should have clarified this request; If your ARSE-HOLE 'feedback' is *automatic rating of 1 since there is no # in the title*, or some such, DON'T PRESS the feedback button to waste my time with useless and asinine blather. Just move on to the next smear*: Could NOT have said it better! U GO, Girl! Now, about the story: U are a true wordsmith and the way you describe the ALWAYS HOT sex scenes are magnificent.

lesbian anal sex, group, incest, lingerie, lingerie, strapon, younger dominating older, – voluptuous women (I am 1 myself, and a PROUD BOTTOM)...I've been a fan for years and I don't expect that to ever change

with this Author

Interesting view of this lifestyle. I can only imagine the aroma in the air of that room!