All Comments on 'The Spark'

A nice, well written story that flowed and beautifully finished with a most erotic admission!

Maybe the author will continue from where she left off. I hope so!

I like how the story is going. It is a good plot so far.

Very nice story that could have taken place in any home.

This is very similar to my own boy-hood fantasy home life.

Please write part 2 as soon as possible, as I can "Hardly" wait longer! Good Work,

A really well written start to your story (and nicely paced too). And this is your first time???

WOW, a little bit of a different start to an incest story, but it feels wonderful. This series could build up to an set of stories. Keep up the wonderful work.

I've been having those same depraved thoughts. It's a wonderful beginning, can't wait for the next chapter.

"she recanted her story"? That means she took it back. Writing is hard but your readers deserve better.

Alice

I am a 43 year old lady and I must compliment you on your writing and the delightfully erotic content of your story.

I am married lady with an 18 year old son and although My husband and I have "an open" marriage, I have never looked at my son in that way. Now I have read your lovely story I think it will be inevitable, but there is no way I would take it any further.

I do hope that you write another chapter, I loved her frustrations and secret desires -We all have those dont we.

Good luck to you.

Kim (I live in the UK)

kimnicelips@gmail.com

Hi, I like your story so far. I like stories with a build up and a genuine reason for the act...not contrived. Your challenge will be making the transition real. I hope you keep it in line with reality and don't make her into something foul mouthed and slutty.

Good beginning. Please continue this.

Go ahead and fuck him. If I was your son you wouldn't get any argument from me; none at all mommy. Good night mom.