All Comments on 'The Substitute Ch. 01'

What comes next

...You may need to wait for the 'incest to begin.' This story is in the Category: Incest/Taboo. The relationship between Mr. Trotter and Mary is not incestuous, but certainly is Taboo. This story also marks the beginning of a series of sexual adventures for Trotter at George Washington High School. Twenty four years later he fornicates for the final time with another student, Melissa. See An Unshareable Secret, published in Literotica on 2/6/2018, for THAT tale. Thanks for your comment. Look into my ouevre for more straight ahead all-in-the-family sex stories. MP2 :-)

Boring. The sex was evasive crap. No incest. No build up. 1 star

Thank you for expressing yourself. MP2 :-)

i gave it 5 stars.........reluctantly. i have liked all your other stories, and i'm on to chapter 2, but the underlying plot just doesn't seem that interesting. But, knowing how great a storyteller you are MP, i'm on to chapter 2

learn about that period.

Schools did not have venetian blinds, they had roil-up shades.

School desks were all wood, with rows made up of the desk part attached to wooden boards and the seat, with the next desk back attached to the same boards.

Look up pictures of 1930s, 1940s and 1950s schoolrooms. I know-- I graduated H.S. in 1956.

Thank you for reading my work and for your comment. Assuming you are an average person, you were born in 1938, nearly a decade after this story takes place. I am not as old as you, however I DID actually look up school desks of that time period and saw pictures of the ‘steel-belly wooden flip-top desk’ I described, as well as the wooden row desks you mention. As for roil-up (sic) shades, horizontal Venetian blinds were prevalent in numerous office buildings and schools as early as the mid-20’s.

I do not question your memory, so I am deducing that you did not attend the same high school that Mary did, which, by 1953, had likely replaced its old school desks with tubular chrome and fiberglass manufacture. MP2 :-)