All Comments on 'The Sultanah Ch. 04'
by YKN4949
- 21 Comments
thebarwellover 8 years agoLove that she is taking the reins, but what's next? Can not wait!
Anonymousover 8 years agoThis story is so good. It has hot,intense sex scenes with amazing characters as well as a great story to keep you interested. There are still plenty of hot sexual encounters that can occur too so I hope Varis doesn't get too attached to Arkadas. But seriously you could probably sell this for money its so good.
Anonymousover 8 years agoSplendid work. It gets me rock hard, brings me to climax, then cuddles with me with an amazing story.
Anonymousover 8 years agoPeople seemed to like this. I thought it was horrible. Who knew?
Anonymousover 8 years agoThank you for your literary efforts. You can't possibly know how much they are enjoyed!
Anonymousover 8 years agoLoved it. Though still trying to understand why the Sultanah doesn't free Arkadas. A few more typos than previous chapters, but still great.
mikey13086over 8 years agoi found myself actually cheering out loud when the camp went up in flames.
Anonymousover 8 years agoAmazing chapter, great job. I hope varis and arkadas stay together to the end and get married.
Anonymousover 8 years agoLike Mikey, I felt jubilation as the camp went up. The cows on fire running into the enemy camp was sheer literary genius!
And of course, the sex as always was great :3
lord_of_cumover 8 years agoThe erotica is no doubt top-notch, but what fascinates me more is the emotional depths this series reaches while, at the same time maintaining the magnificence and vividness of the incidents. Very well written - I lost it when Arkadas replies " Atleast I understand that I do not understand"; Such romance and erotica beautifully woven in a medieval fantasy setting, can't ask for anything more. Thanks a lot for this wonderful experience :)
Anonymousabout 8 years agoOkay,
You have me now I can hardly wait to get to the next chapter.
The writing is superb the way you flesh out your characters and your use of
many different adjectives is great.
I would read this if there was not explicit erotica, but since there is it's a BONUS.
I must agree with all your well wishing admirers and I can only say to your detractors,
DON'T READ IT, if you don't like it.
But don't leave nasty negative comments either.
I am in this story for the long run.
Thank you for a wonderful fantasy.
Randee
Anonymousover 6 years agoI found this chapter on the random list and its soooooo amazing!!!! I'm going to save this in my favorite stories! Please continue your writing for your skills are fantastic!!! Xoxo
Anonymousover 3 years agoI have been reading stories for a number of years and always jump from author to author. This one is a Keeper! I am working my way through every story and each chapter. They definitely have a the right balance of what we're all here for and also a plot that draws you in. If you haven't sampled the goods from this author, you are missing out!
Anonymousabout 3 years agoAnother great chapter. I love the way you incorporate the various people the Sultanah meets into the story. Soyguncu, a pickpocket, becomes a trusted and valued accomplice in helping the Sultanah defeat her enemies -- first the priests of Tanri and now her military foes. I look forward to seeing her further involvement as the Sultanah consolidates her power and restores her Empire. I also loved how the Sultanah used the aid of prostitutes to achieve her victory. In fact, except for Saygili, so far all those who have helped her have been women, which I'm sure is not unintentional.
Blue Eyes
BushLover69almost 3 years agoLove the world building and plot progression, so much so that I'm genuinely curious to read what happens next, and not just rush to the sexy parts.
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