All Comments on 'The Sultanah Ch. 09'

Thanks

I'm really sorry that it took so long to write and edit. It simply isn't interesting or entertaining to read. And the names of your characters are annoying rather than clever. UGH!

I don't typically comment on erotic material, and yet I find myself here hours after having read it for that exact purpose. I've been following this story since you posted the first part, and eagerly check daily for new chapters. You've done an absolutely fantastic job on this piece.

This is awesome! I cannot believe the ignorant morons who'd rather read something along the lines of "he met. She met. Wham. Bam" and I cannot believe that a story - a proper STORY - that actually feels epic and amazing, of this nature exists. The erotica is actually pretty well-entwined with the plot, and I love how you keep pushing these unbelievable situations on Varis, where she gets to have sex with so many gorgeous women, and yet, it makes sense within the context and internal logic of this story.

You've done a fantastic job. Care to enlighten us about your thought process behind some of these names and history? Was there any particular culture, or novel, you took inspiration from? I'm guessing there's a fair bit of Persian/Iranian and Prince of Persia influence here.

Really enjoyed this series, I hope the next will be coming soon... Like tomorrow maybe.

Simply amazing. Keep it up

So awesome.

Keep it up! Want more of this epic story!

This is a good story. I eagerly await updates.

Keep up the excellent work

This is a very well written erotica, with the fantasy elements and the world building nicely magnifying the impact of the erotic parts. Eagerly awaiting the next update -- the wait has been longer than the previous installments :)

Can't stop reading!!

This is an epic story and well written, there were points in the first chapter i did think the build up was too convaluted, but had read your intro and persevered, BOY WAS IT WORTH IT. as others have said what a story line for an erotic story, kudos definitely a fan.

And to the moron that thinks the names are a way to feel smart, you are reading a story about a Sultan(ah)... ie an Arabian king of sorts, so you were never going to read about Britney, Mary-Kate or Lindsey

I’m wondering if you’re going to run out of kinks before you get to the end of the story. Still waiting for the Sultanah to have sex with a man ;-)

Another excellent chapter.

excellent!

Nice, but somehow not as good as previous chapters.