All Comments on 'The Summer Nymph'

You could push your scores up another digit if you would get an editor. Too many mistakes to keep the story flowing. Good characters and a sad closed ending. This story could have gone 5-6 pages with some good action with the other two girls.

This was a coming of age story, and the ending fit. Good job.

A neat quick story.

Too bad she didn't teach home more. Maybe Mac?

One summer it it began, one summer to never end. Lucky Man to run in the rain