All Comments on 'The Super'

The thing I like about OneWhoAdores' stories is that you end up rooting for the characters. His Belle Dames Sans Merci are human beings and his 'slaves' are human too.

And, more than most, this story contrasts the joyless mechanics of going through the motions - however well done - with a D/s relationship underpinned by mutual love and respect.

Bravo

I really enjoy the clear respect and love that develops between the dom and sub in your stories. It's a refreshing change to the predominant bdsm stories on here, that usually end up as one sided abuse.

Beautiful, raw and romantic femdom. I loved the slow burning, unclichéd build of sexual tension before the inevitable explosion. It isn't easy for a writer to choose all the right words, but they are all perfectly placed in this story. There is a rhythm to each sentence and they flow into each other, letting the reader become lost in the cadence. 5⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Beautiful! Excellent!