All Comments on 'The T-Shirt'

Congratulations Bear. 5⭐

Would have worked perfectly fine in LW.

Much more believable story when there is a breakup or divorce without revenge.

Then he starts his life again.

Whether the new woman is more beautiful, or richer, or sexier, or more sexual,........ who cares?

Above all, she just has to be more loving, more faithful and more loyal.

That was short and sweet. I have liked your other stories alot and you didn't disappoint with this one. I did enjoy it. 5stars

taking it up the ass? yeah, he definitely had the wrong woman. Massive skank and cum dumpster, and apparently her boss is closeted in denial about his sexuality, which is no big surprise, given he's a lawyer, after all. Love that he didn't put up with any bullshit about trying to 'talk it out' or let her explain. Can't wait for some commenter to say "but she's not married yet' as if that would make any difference to a guy that actually has 2 working brain cells in his head.

Good story!! ⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Roar, Bear!

5

Nice truncated but nice

4 stars

Loved it. Thanks. Five stars. Just one little nit... It takes a lot longer than 4 years to make GySgt in the Corps. Even with that, the Tramp approves. Oorah.

Very enjoyable but would love a continuation with Janice and the romance.

Well done

It's a 5* story. I wish it were longer (of course I would say that), but the plot is great. I didn't even realize this wasn't a LW story until I started reading some of the comments.

To (mis)quote an author I enjoy, "I approve."

Very enjoyable. Please keep it alive with how things progress with Janice.

Nice touch, almost begs for another part.

I agree with all. A nice story, but think a bit more with Janice would make it rock. Still worthy of 5 stars.

Excellent story.

FTDS

Very nice story 4*

Yeah, l liked it. Too short though. There was a lot more fun to be had with this story.

Scores 4/5

Very sweet!

very nice, maybe you could write a sequel about him and janice

steppinontoes

Would appreciate a follow up story. ;)

I apologize. I didn't know how this would be received. You folks are a lot nicer than "Loving Wives". I am contemplating a series of 'sweet' stories about Janice and Daniel. Just bear (Heh, Heh) with me. I am doing this as a side gig. Thank you again. I appreciate it.

The BEAR

Enjoyed this!

good short story, with the right ending

Continue this story please. Give us the future joys of Daniel and Janice. Imagine sexy Daniel with a good hairy chest and a cock that pleases Janice to no end! Good for them!

Nicely done. Short, compact and well told. Thank you.

E-7 in only 4 years?

5 Stars for Great Writing, Great Story. And especially for a Happy Ending! I am glad he found out before they got married! He was able to rid himself of the Elites he was going to suffer from. LOL Good Job Bear! Thanks for the effort! #Buster2U

He forgot the ring

4 yrs USMC and Gunny? Not likely and in fact, no. Never. Would. Happen. More like terminal lance corporal.

Great story. BTB doesn't have to be violent, his revenge was far better

Excellent story well written, you are a very talented story teller and you improve with every new effort. Love your work.

Looking for part 2

Funny

Screams for a sequel - PLEASE?-

DANIEL CONNOR WAS A WEAK PUSSYWHIPPED WIMO

A good little story.

I like it. Good story. Great ending.

Like some others we need a part two!

Another great story. Direst and to the point. No bs 3 pages of worthless backstory.

Easy, entertaining read. I find it hard her father made the threatening call after receiving the video, but otherwise everything made sense. 4.2*

Good story, definitely a fiver! GySgt (E-7) in four years for a 21 yr old!?! B.S.!!!!!!!!!!!! No deduction though.

Wonderful, 10 stars! At least he found she was a skanky slut before he married her. Now, Janice can have her husband, like the T-shirt said... EXCELLENT, like all the others!

Uhhhhh, no. Good story but a 4 year stint and promotion to E-7, Gunnery Sergeant? Not even in a science fiction story.

4 years in the marines and he's a funny? Stopped reading right there

Masterpeice

Wonderful series, 10 stars! Too bad he couldn't get his hands on the whore's old man, and turn him every which way but loose!

Thin.