All Comments on 'The Tale of Her Mother Too Pt. 02'

It's really too bad you stopped writing this story. I was into it. I was just waiting for the point where Rick invented his death ray and conquered the world. Or maybe it would be a hypno-ray. Whatever, it's amusing to see how he went from being a wounded veteran to a genius at the stock market who's also a deadly martial arts expert with nearly unlimited funds. He's well on his way to becoming either Batman or Dr. Doom, I can't quite make up my mind which.