All Comments on 'The Taming of Natalie Ch. 01'

Looking forward to more.

liking the story so far hope you make the next chapter longer

Many have been in this situation, it takes time to adjust. Some do make the best of the situation and really enjoy it.

This calls for more chapters. Thanks

This is hot and sexy!

Well written, no enormous sizes promoting believability, and so open ended. Might be the perfect set up for a narration change. Say over to Natalie's. Just a suggestion as it seems you've got a good handle on what's your story. Please, continue and thanks.

Very hot, looking forward to the next chapter!

Very good start to a great series can't wait for the next chapter.

I really loved this peice. I hope its continued.

I love the sexual tension you have built up between Josh and Natalie in this first chapter. I am excited to read where this storyline goes!

NICE BUILD UP. SEXUAL TENSION IS FIRST-RATE. I LIKE THE STORYLINE SO FAR. HOPE IT CONTINUES.