All Comments on 'The Taylor Family Ch. 01'

I think this is headed in an interesting direction and I love the fact that you're not rushing the story.

this thing sucks your immature girls suck

I'll be interested to see where this goes and unlike some I don't mind the slow(er) build-up.

Good start, I look forward to more.............

This story needs additional development. There are many ways that this can go and I hope you pursue them.

Thanks for a good story.

I like the start. Can't wait to see the development. Hope we don't have to wait too long.

Ruth will sleep with the unmentioned dad first and Kristen will be the first with Ann.

Really wonderful start, you've done a great job of creating some tension and several subplots, and given some personality to the girls. Hopefully you'll take the time to give the parents some character as well as you move on; Ann is intriguing but still pretty flat right now. Overall great story and I'm enjoying the pace. *****

Might be your best yet, Ignoble. I agree with those who applaud you for taking your time with this story... this one is well worth stretching out. Can't wait for Chapter Two!

I have a feeling this is going to be a strong story. I can't wait for ch2. Best story I've read in a long time.

I really enjoyed the buildup between the sisters and the slow change in their relationship.

I'd love to read on, unfortunately I'm not sure I can get over the inclusion of mom and dad in this. It's one thing to explore innocent sisterly experimentation, it's another to get them sexually involved with their parents. Age difference and abuse of responsibility is a problem, but I wouldn't mind as such if it was just one of the girls trying it with their mom, or even their dad, but all of that in one story just screams fantasy.

But you're a good writer and it was nice while it lasted, thank you.

very clever

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