All Comments on 'The Tease'

An amazing story, full of all the wild intense exhilarating nuances that I love about your stories.

The final photo session was mind blowing, I could see it all unfold bit by bit and I'm still reeling with the images in my head.

Brava, Jenn, BRAVA!

I loved the way you slowly turned up the heat. The story progresses from mildly erotic to a cool blue flame, to one that's white hot. Well done!

Your stories have been a turn on I return to quite often. Thanks for adding another one to the batch. Great story. Hope you don't keep us waiting this long for a new one.

You made me harder than Chinese algebra.

Wow!!! You bring that moment back to life in your stories. I can see myself as a fly on the wall, jerking off while this transpires.

Wonderful!!!

Always love your stories Jen. Truth is always more interesting than fiction. Glad to see you documented another event. I don't even know you and I saved a couple of your pictures so I could imagine taking them. You are a scalding hot woman!

Jen, another great story! Glad to see you back writing. You're the best!

The suspense was awesome,very intense, with an unexpected finale. Kept me spellbound, and extremely rambunctious.

Just learned another word for HORNY:-))

Looking forward to the next.

I love the dynamics, the trip, the narrative, the look into your incredible mind. The force/resistance fantasy wasn't my cup of tea, but it was handled oh so well and I know it is a fantasy for some. So glad to have you back and writing here again. Would love to see you work out the shoe salesman story that you posted on your thread and have it posted here..... i know it is work... but i do love what you do. Thank you

I loved it and just like your other stories, was very hot and sexy. It had me so turned on thinking about how turned on you were and enjoying the whole experience. I enjoyed it immensely! I hope you will write another one real soon, thanks.

Loved your story. Hope you will write another one soon.

The glaring grammar gaffs stop the story cold several times and is beneath your ability. Other than that and the slow start, it is a good story. Thanks

I have a lot of the same fantasies as you - loved it!!

I really liked this - it's great to read something original for a change.

Some of the dialogue could be tidied up a bit but for once the odd typo or missing speech marks didn't bother me. You can spell come too!

Whoa, you really got me going there. Thanks. It's good to read stories from a woman's perspective.

You were the first writer I added to my favorites when I joined the site, and I've returned over time to read almost all of your stories. I've parceled them out slowly after noticing the last update was years before I found them. I also love the photo in your biography, and always visit it before reading your stories, to fix you in my mind. I really love the way you write! The details you offer, the natural way a story progresses as you share it, and the INSANELY HOT way they always end!!! This is one of my favorites, that built to such a fever-pitch by the final shoot! Thanks for returning with a fantastic story! I did a double take when I saw the 2012 date on the story and had to read it right then! Please come again soon Jenn, and tell us about it when you do! 😉

Really good story, very erotic.

Huge fan of your stories and I can't believe you're back. Please give me more as I LOVE the way you write.

More, please!

I'm like Jim. A little timid. I know a few girls that I get particularly tongue-tied around because I want to be with them so much.

Your invitation to Jim (piffer) is like a dream. I want to see these girls I like in their naked glory flaunting their pussies and tits. I want to have these girls inviting me to hold their breasts and opening their legs for my fingers and cock.

Thank you. Thank you.

I love your stories and had long thought you would never post again. I am a woman who has a hard time, sometimes, getting in the mood (not everyone can be like you, oh well!). Your stories ALWAYS do the trick! If you get time, please post some more!!!

My god I don't think I've orgasmed that hard from me doing it myself in an amazingly long time! Thank you very much for the brilliant read!!!

You captured all of us, the Bob's, Jim's and Steven's, each with redeeming strengths and weaknesses. And who can challenge that most females might imagine the many moods of Jenn? I enjoyed the realistic development of the characters, and the flow of situation(s) from intro, setup, casual warmup, easing into expanded horizons, roll playing approaching the edge of comfort zones for all, spontaneity and the following day(s) reflections. A quality, erotic and complete story line. OR IS IT? This reader understands authors have another life, so this 'animal' is willing to wait however long it takes for another masterpiece ... For "The Tease" to stimulate another creation.

What a hot woman you are! I hope this was close to reality in your real life! Lucky man who gets to fuck you!

By far your stories are the hottest reads on the site.

Quite frankly, I have a hard time reading through most stories on Lit. Just not that compelling most of the time. I am riveted to Jen's stories and read every word. The Tease is one of her best, and she just keeps getting better. I hope she gets back into writing. I always check her page for news stories when I come here. I can't wait for the next one.

Thanks jenn , awesome read once again , here I am reading this in bed while the wife's asleep , stroking my cock fuck I'm horny

.... Chris xxoo

A great story, electrifying stuff.

I'm an old man and that had me "harder than times in '29", to quote the great Richard Pryor.

I wanna be jenn. Oh yea baby.

Magic story, very hot. Realistic too - believable that one can have mixed feelings about others seeing intimate photos of us.

Looking forward to more of your stories.

First time I have read your stories, but it will not be the last. This was incredible. As several other comments mentioned, your story led me to a sticky mess in my hand. I would love to know if this was the real you and is more of a journal than fiction.

Thank you.

Pay back is double, I'm sure the guys agree with us.

I can understand why you do not write very often anymore. Pieces like this one take a great deal of time and hard work to get right. Your willingness to share such intimate details and to write with such precisely slow build-up of intensity shows how important the so-called story arc is. You slowly real us in and we imagine that we are in the story with you. All I can say is thank you!! From a long-time fan of yours.

well done. would be interesting to see written in something other than the first person.

The bit about the goat was strange...

It's wonderfully naughty, appreciated by the dirtiest mind in Lee County, FL assisted by two wives who were multiply orgasmic exhibitionists enjoying threesomes, foursomes and moresomes. Advanced age, 84, I can offer only oral performance and

relate true stories that have gals able to sail boats in their panties.

As for you, stay wet.

The only problem is enough alcohol is consumed by only three persons in less than two hours that in reality would have ten people passed out drunk.

THE KEY QUESTION?

WHEN & WHERE CAN WE SEE THESE PHOTOS?????? :+)))

My girl is going to get all wet reading that story, She would love two cocks fucking her.

10 Stars

Thank you for a great story.

I really enjoyed Jennifer posing and then posing with Jim for Stephan with a special finish.

However, I wish Jennifer drank less and smoked fewer joints and cut out the mescaline. She sounds great just without the other stuff.

scorching hot!

Incredible story Jenn. So erotic and exciting. Sounded so real as I read it. You put do much thought and time into this I could almost see it in my mind. Thank you. Center exit to tag more