All Comments on 'The Tenant'

I'm confused. I sure hope there's a part 2.

I also think this story needs to be rewritten. The sex is way too rushed. That part needs a lot more details.

Keep your day job.

I love the ending! How she gave him the letter and he didn't even notice, she knew that if she was late he'd have to come over and her plan could be set into motion to have him. The fact that she threw in a $100 bill is hilarious

Yeah! Get his stiff-backed arse on a bed and whip it baby!

That was cool,

Evebroughtanaxthistime

Loved the sudden shifting of who was really getting what they wanted!

nice twist. wasn't expecting that.

I really enjoyed this story and look forward to reading your others. I thought it was extremly well writen and managed to keep a high level of tension going from the start to nice twist at the end. I'm not so sure I'd feel quite so used an abused as he seemed to though, I'd just look forward to her not paying on time next month!

Pete.