All Comments on 'The Term Paper Ch. 05'

Ok I love The series it has been a great Siri so far if you could make Paul just go away next chapter then continued on with with Emily and mom at home and Emily move in maybe but don't let the next one be your final one because I can see this going for 15-20 installments

Great stuff. Keepit coming: the beaches, clubs, exhibes, coquinage, all the fun of the Cap.

All the mistakes and the endless "doods" have ruined a good story.

The last 2 chapters were really bad, I feel Emily is there just as a filler and doesn't add anything too the story. I thought this was just about the Mother and son finding more about themselves, but it just went a pretty good story to a bad one. There was no reason to add Paul and cherry to the story either, that part was just wrong.

True, you need a good editor (and I wouldn't mind helping you, if you wanted.) The misspellings and grammar issues do detract but not much in my opinion. I really like your story-line and writing style. I understand why Emily was brought in, (though it was a bit abrupt) - at least partially to give them each the freedom to explore others and other fantasies. I hope you continue this serial. Let's see just how wild mom's desires and fantasies get.

love your work please keep up the good work and remember this isn't some college application essay so don't sweat the spelling errors the only mistake you could make would be leaving it unfinished and trust me I've read thousands of stories and yours has gotten my attention and that is saying something

extremely sexual Love the idea!!

Another man has just ruind the story.

Bringing in the man and his daughter totally ruined the story. After reading it I don't see what you thought bringing them into the story would accomplish. I didn't see any point in bringing in the first young girl into the story. It didn't add the to story but sure did mess it up. One of the most meaningless stories I've read I've read so far.

Why did you bring in the dickhead and his daughter. You have taken what looked like a great relationship and turned it into a tawdry affair. It went from a good story to a mom showing us how she is making her son a cuck in training....Way to fuck up a potentially good story!!!

Oh yeah, mom will discuss any change. Trash.

bummer bringing in the man/daughter combo - totally agree with Anonymous

10/20/16

What a brilliantly devious twist. I would love to read many more chapters. Like all the possibilities during the rest of their stay and what will happen when they get back home. Please carry on this story.

This story is friggin amazing. Please continue.