All Comments on 'The Therapist'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I could rate this, but I wouldn't.

It is too short for what I seek.

It is simply, too perfect, too revealing.

It was my reality 36 hours ago.

I am still emotionally exhausted by the experience.

It is only 34 months since the light of my life breathed her last.

I hate the big C.

tonydxxtonydxxover 1 year ago

An intriguing start. I look forward to the next chapter.

DrStingDrStingover 1 year ago

I say, You say, doesn't work well. Please let the characters tell the story and not a narrator. This is just friendly advice. I am not bashing you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Incomplete. Also the narration makes the read difficult.

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