by semblanceoffantasy
I could rate this, but I wouldn't.
It is too short for what I seek.
It is simply, too perfect, too revealing.
It was my reality 36 hours ago.
I am still emotionally exhausted by the experience.
It is only 34 months since the light of my life breathed her last.
I hate the big C.
I say, You say, doesn't work well. Please let the characters tell the story and not a narrator. This is just friendly advice. I am not bashing you.