All Comments on 'The Thirst Ch. 01: The New House'

An actual buildup and tangible sex......good job. Keep going. You definitely have a fan in me

a promising story here if you keep going.

a great start to your erotic writing. you must now turn around sister's inner guilt and let her flow with pleasure yet again.... please!

One of the more unusual twists in starting a story like this. A good dose of reality with the guilt kicking over what she just did. Keep going.

Outstanding start, I look forward to reading more!

Keep going. Sometime 1st attempts get all screwy. Well done.

I liked it. It was a good start. I'm hoping that there's something in the house, a spirit or a curse or something like that, that is going to cause the family to fuck each other.

I can't wait until you add another chapter. So many reasons why she stated across country, Why did Dad give her the bedroom in the basement instead of his older son? Never heard of the daughter getting the basement with outside entrance. Still hope you will add more chapters.

This is great, must have more.

I like the set-up and how the story evolves. I particularly like Audrey's looks, love small tits, 32aa delicious! Please, please continue, cannot wait to read more about the dynamics in this family.