All Comments on 'The Thunderstorm'

I'd like to slap Chet. And it bothers me intensely that erotica abuses the fact that physiological responses are NOT the same as consent without addressing that.

The bottom line is that this is FICTION.

Chet does push more than a good neighbour should but that's the story, the conflict/resistance, and final submission/acceptance of the husbands suppressed desire.

The final threesome is more coercive, and no real acceptance occurs, but that forced possession can be very hot to read. In the end this is well structured and written FICTION with a believeable conflicted protagonist, where I got off half way through. And no real humans were hurt or abused in the process.

... of this genre I've read -- OMG. Very vivid and erotic!

I lïked this story very much right up to the point the other guy turned up.