All Comments on 'The Ties that Blind'

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EroticApeEroticApeabout 6 years ago
Incredible! Amazing! Fantastic!

I can't find enough superlatives!

So incredibly hot! And so well written!

I'm also enjoying the little Easter eggs to your growing shared universe.

So good!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
I like it

Particularly the rimming, keep up the good work.

Geisha1Geisha1about 6 years ago
Very clever story

Your stories are alwYs fun and sexy to read. You can clearly add to this story if you want. But what a terrific read. I always look forward to your writings.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
research

Acetylene "tanks" are constructed so that they vent but will not explode your story starts on an implausible premise

RanDog025RanDog025about 6 years ago
BEAUTIFUL STORY, 5 STARS EASY

I'D GIVE YOU 10 STARS IF POSSIBLE. IT WAS A BEAUTIFUL STORY, REALLY! THANK YOU! I'VE GOT YOU IN MY FAVORITES NOW AND DON'T WORRY ABOUT THE ANON ACETYLENE TANK COMMENT, SOME PEOPLE, FOR THE LIFE OF THEM STILL HAVEN'T FIGURED OUT THAT THE STORIES ARE FANTASY / FICTION, WRITTEN FOR OUR ENJOYMENT. THANX

Geisha1Geisha1about 6 years ago
Hasn’t the anonymous moron

Who posted the acetylene comment heard of “poetic license”? Who cares? It’s still a great, erotic story!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
re: Hasn’t the anonymous moron

That person posted a fact, you threw a temper tantrum over it, and yet, somehow, THAT person's a moron?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Anon you should do your research ...

When exposed to excess temperature, pressure, or mechanical shock, pure or less than pure acetylene gas can undergo a violent, explosive decomposition reaction. Additionally, if this reaction, or an ignition of acetylene occurs within the torch base or supply hose, it can propagate back into the storage cylinder causing it to explode violently.

vsloverbicdvsloverbicdabout 6 years ago
Ties that bind...

A very good, erotic story. It needn't be exactly factual, being fiction. It was very hot and most males (and perhaps females too) I'm sure would enjoy it. I sure did! Please keep us posted on his progress. Chapter 2?

sunburycdsunburycdabout 6 years agoAuthor
Controversial!?

I'll defer to the experts on the likelihood of an explosion; here I was thinking the miraculous recovery of his sight would be the contentious issue! Anyway, thank you to those who enjoyed. Sorry vsloverbicd, no thought of a chapter two.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Who cares

These are made up stories, for the most part. Why do a bunch of people think they are literary critics? Just enjoy the story, which was very good by the way, and if you want realism... go to the library.

boatbummboatbummabout 6 years ago
Always Mind Doctor Mom

She'll always have just the right treatment for whatever ails you! ;-)

The story works very well, so who cares what causes the temporary blindness. It's all about the loving Mom and her patient....

Thanks for another fun romp!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Beautiful

I loved this story. Very touching how a mother always knows what her child needs and is willing to meet th o we needs.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
So good.

Really liked the story within the story. Could of cum 3 or 4 times in this one. You do mother and son incest really well.

goducks1goducks1about 6 years ago
not to pile on

but 5 stars yet again. I love your stories - always VERY sexy. and the pretext was straight forward - which works well in a shorter 1 chapter story. I thought the tease was fantastic. I'm looking forward to your next story!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
excellent

I love the bit where she is shaving him and slowly impales herself on his cock as when she straddles him and then lowers herself it would naturally open her pussy lips for his penetration. Great read

linnearlinnearabout 5 years ago
Soooooooo Hot

I second the comment about his mom lowering herself into him while shaving him, that was an amazing but of writing. 5 stars.

TSreaderTSreaderabout 5 years ago
A very hot story

Very hot indeed... Thank you!

Davidj001Davidj001about 5 years ago
More,,,,

More please

Joshuad2477sJoshuad2477salmost 5 years ago
Finally

An original idea on the injured incest story. Most have one person with broken arms or hands or even legs which is boring and really doesn't logistically work in the grand scheme of things but the blindness was original and added so many layers of erotic atmosphere to the story that made the story even better. I wish you would do maybe a 2 page sequel where the son forces the mom to wear a mask and she has to experience being "blind" for a few days allowing the son to tease and pleasure her, also would allow for an ending to the story. Just a suggestion

Bigmink2303Bigmink2303almost 5 years ago
Enjoy your writing style

I've read almost everything you've written and have to say how much I appreciate how you develop your story line and the subsequent actions, especially between a mother and her son...if the truth be known, I have longtime fantasies about my own mother, sadly never realized, so I truly enjoy reading your stories. Keep up the great work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Nice one 5 stars

I don't care for the anal crap, I'm not gay...

blackknight314blackknight314over 4 years ago
As usual...

... I loved the story. I felt that he should fake still being blind for a while to observe his mom and the things that she gets away with in front of her blind son. Same as when she stayed in the bathroom and watched him jack off . Great story.

ROCKY70ROCKY70over 4 years ago
It's all the same except, how gets hurt. ^*!^*!^*!

This time it's the SONS eyes, sometimes,

it's MOMS hands, sometimes it's SISTERS

legs, even DAD gets two broken arms.

It all comes out the same ,somebody

gets fucked,sucked,and cunt lapped,etc.

THANKS

grayge37grayge37over 3 years ago

Good job! One of the best that I have read.

AzureAshAzureAshover 3 years ago
"... She closed her eyes to enter his sightless world and could see the two of them, mother and son fucking. The purest, most beautiful form of incest...."

Sometimes it doesn't feel like a story, it feels like a scripture...

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57about 3 years ago

Loved it! So fucking hot! Five stars and a favorite point!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

THE BEST

GeorgeGaleGeorgeGaleabout 2 years ago

Outfuckingstanding! One of your best stories, so very well written and told. I think what made it flow so smoothly and quickly was the fact that the son could not see and therefore, was not hesitant to make love to his mom as she was also not hesitant in her actions to make love to him..............():\

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

What a hot story, although I do like some of the suggestions in the comments. I liked Blacknight's suggestion of him his blindness after return of his sight to 'see' what his mom had been doing, but maybe a better one was Joshua's suggestion of putting a blindfold on mom to let her experience it. Great writing. Keep it up (pardon the pun)! 5⭐

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Hallelujah! Praise the miraculous healing power of anal sex!!

AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

I loved every word except for "shithole" (if a girl said that to me during our anal escapades, it would be a real boner killer) and "boy cream".

I'll never understand why some commenters get so technical with incest porn stories. Did they come for the porn, or to find out how acetylene tanks work? For fucks sake.

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