by lamoureuse
... if you don't continue this story I will seek you out and force you to write the next chapter. 500 stars
this story is way better than the usual stuff here; which i read daily.
keep it up.
Dont care spelling errors or bad anything. I just loved this story and hope the posts come in each and every day from now on. More stars than on a cloudless night. Well done with this story.
No fair! No DAMN fair!!!
You are about to cause many of your readers to have major withdrawal attacks if the next chapter isn't soon forthcoming.
Absolutely fantastic.
Grabbed & held my attention from the beginning.
Congrats -- and keep writing!
1D9
Ditto on the prior comments- essentially, "When the hell will I get to read the next installment?!"
Wonderfully written, engaging, with great characters. All round WINNER!
Is there more to the story? I must read it!