All Comments on 'The Toy Maker'

I'm not really into BDSM, so my evaluation isn't worth much. I do dig the humiliation, though!

The story was good, as far as I read it. Stopped after Chapter 3 because the story was too long for a single sitting / reading. Might want to break the chapters into individual stories like the most of the other authors.

So glad you are back. You have always been one of my favorite authors...thank you for sharing your gift. You are truly one of the best!!!

I Just love tour stories ans this one in particular!! Thann you

On any and every level.

Loved the story, and the thought process of Ms.Downey. Puts the reader in sub space....total turn on!

Looking forward to the next episode. Great characterisation.....more please!

Given the fact that this is a porn site, this story fails to draw the readers interest as most of the actions of the characters seemed to be without reason.

it would have been bad.

I really liked it :)

Nothing in the story draws the reader to the characters; as emotionally dry as programming code.

Another Chapter of what Juilia and Ms. Downey do is an absolute MUST.

This could be followed Up with other episodes where they share the two slaves with others.

I enjoyed this story, I can only dream of meeting someone like Julia or Carol. A little more characterization would be good, and I'd love to read more of Julia being dominated and coming deeper under the control of her puppet mistress.

Yes it was a little far fetched but what erotic fiction isn't? Especially when dealing with mind control. It was hot read and I'm sure Miss Downey could have some devilish games to play with her new toys. More power to dominant women I say

the best BDSM story I read here....it covered everything, submission , cuckolding, humiliation, just incredible

This is great you should write more

See how far they will go to serve there Mistress

Loved this. More please

Julia must realize that she is a toy also and be embarrassed by being taken with another man and by a woman.