All Comments on 'The Trainer'

by johnnys123

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hammer17hammer17over 14 years ago
Hmmmm

Very good start, can hardly wait for the next chapter..

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
Now this is a real fantasy

Older guy and an eighteen year old girl, his to fuck all weekend and her mama has paid him to do it. Hell! It doesn't get any better than this.

MY2847MY2847over 14 years ago
Wish it were me...

Part 2 please.... I would love to see him ask her to masturbate in front of him and he return the favor.... see where that leads...

LAROCLAROCover 11 years ago
OH ! BOY !

When does he wake up , and find out it was all a dream......LAROC OF AGES

ROCKY70ROCKY70over 4 years ago
IT WAS OK,BUT DID I MISS THE INCEST.^*!^*!^*!

What did this story have to do with incest?, it was just an older man ,

taking a young girl for the first time.

She was not a family member at all .

Marklynda2Marklynda29 months ago

A very well thought out and written story. I would enjoy reading more of your work but this is the last one posted. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

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