by ponyfitness
I really loved your story. It definately turned me on a great deal.
Gina
I loved your opening chapter of this series. You're obviously a very talented writer and you have great style. The attention to details about being a fitness trainer, gyms, clients, etc, is drawn from real life and makes it very pleasurable to read, like a sexy memoir you're writing. I thought it was so hot and steamy, and it has a plot (from what I see) and I love plot-driven erotica. This is one of the better works on here.