All Comments on 'The Truth in Goon'

Very good start actually, but needs more! Please!!!

Once the story got going, it was pretty good, but confusing. The only reference to "goon" in the whole story is "But once I got a few cups of goon [my behavior changed]" but what is "goon". I always thought a goon was thug or a jerk with a tire iron, not something you drink for a cold. Also the transition from having a cold to licking pussy is a bit fast. But keep writing and I look forward to Part 2.

In Oz, goon is a word for wine in a box.

Yes, 'Goon' in Australia is cheap cask wine. In the future I'll probably add some definitions for any slang I use, that way I hopefully avoid confusing people.

The whole cold thing was basically a little joke: as most of these stories have both individuals involved being in perfect condition...which isn't always true. Regardless it's good to hear some constructive criticism!

So "Roxy" had some Goon for liquid courage and in the end pussy became an acquired taste for the "straight" girl who enjoyed it so much she climaxed. The truth is she likes women (too). Flyck will there be a part 2 whereby Roxy is pleasured by a woman. I think you've laid a foundation here to continue the story.

Yes, there will be. =3

I'm planning for it to go further with each chapter as 'Roxy' goes down the rabbit hole, but it's going to start off pretty safe for the first few submissions.

p.s. I love German chocolate.

Wow, how cute is your writing!

For me, this was erotic yet humorous, a heady mix just like a ‘gamy’ Private part.

Wonderfully descriptive

There are anti-sexual harassment trainings that some U.S.A. universities offer to students mostly in blue states. Common theme - drunk people cannot consent to sex.