All Comments on 'The Tutor Pt. 01'

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mel_pomenemel_pomenealmost 9 years ago
A blast of a first story!

What a wonderful introduction to a new talent -- thank you and welcome, cumcouple; this was amazingly good, and I can hardly wait for part two.

Five stars -- and please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter!

cumcouplecumcouplealmost 9 years agoAuthor
Thanks!

Thanks for your feedback, mel! We had a great time writing this installment and are working on Part II. It should be up soon!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

I'm only on page 2 but in the beginning it said something about a Mr. Jackson at Hunter's home and then Mr. Davies is Hunter's dad? I'm really confused but it might say later on so I'll just keep reading and hope it's answered soon!

cumcouplecumcouplealmost 9 years agoAuthor
Mr. Jackson vs. Mr. Davies

Sorry about the confusion there. The prologue was written long before the rest of the story, and we didn't catch it until it was posted. Mr. Jackson should be Mr. Davies. We'll correct it with the new version once part II is done.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Really good!

I LOVE this story! I'm hoping that the next one will be up very soon. Also, thank you for clearing up the Mr. Jackson and Mr. Davies thing, I figured that must have been what happened but just wanted to make sure. I'm DEFINATLY hooked on this story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
LIKE!

:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Absolutely brilliant stuff!

Well written, and made me horny as!

isubmit2uisubmit2uabout 4 years ago

This is something I’ve fantasized for years but I guess it will never happen for me.,, what a shame... I loved your writing!

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