by cumcouple
What a wonderful introduction to a new talent -- thank you and welcome, cumcouple; this was amazingly good, and I can hardly wait for part two.
Five stars -- and please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter!
Thanks for your feedback, mel! We had a great time writing this installment and are working on Part II. It should be up soon!
I'm only on page 2 but in the beginning it said something about a Mr. Jackson at Hunter's home and then Mr. Davies is Hunter's dad? I'm really confused but it might say later on so I'll just keep reading and hope it's answered soon!
Sorry about the confusion there. The prologue was written long before the rest of the story, and we didn't catch it until it was posted. Mr. Jackson should be Mr. Davies. We'll correct it with the new version once part II is done.
I LOVE this story! I'm hoping that the next one will be up very soon. Also, thank you for clearing up the Mr. Jackson and Mr. Davies thing, I figured that must have been what happened but just wanted to make sure. I'm DEFINATLY hooked on this story!
This is something I’ve fantasized for years but I guess it will never happen for me.,, what a shame... I loved your writing!