All Comments on 'The Twelve Tables Ch. 11'

I enjoy the way you have more than a simple story arc. Adding different elements keeps your writing so fresh. Thanks for sharing.

Really badly written. Garbage!

love entire story from chapter 1-11 keep writing. ready for Chapter 12. keep up the good work!!

Im addicted to your storys ellie i want more everyday! So happy to see a new chapter and cant wait to see where this goes for peri and josh&

I'm loving the direction this story is taking, good job and thanks for the great read.

can't wait for more and more...

I love this story.

I was getting a little worried after chapter 10 about the trial, but after this chapter I have a little more faith in it.

Your such a good writer and can tell a fantastic story.

I’m a big fan of your stories.

I read and re-read them with much pleasure.

Can’t wait for chapter 12!

Thanks for sharing your talent.

Only a little thing, it's a bit unreal to have her come so easily, it's not just your story everyone seems to do it. Make it more special/realistic

The only reason I'm still reading is in the hopes that when you start killing people off it will be Josh and his Dad! My second hope is that if Josh doesn't die in some manner as stupid as he is then Peri dumps his ass for Dante! I'll bet if she were his girl Dante would be down there in a heartbeat checking on her or better yet getting her the hell out of there. Josh isn't man or mature enough to deserve a dog let alone an adoring wife.

I am returning to this story after more than a year and am enjoying it immensely.

As with the last comment, I feel Josh is kind of weak. He should fight against the harsh "trial" that Peri has to endure.

I am such a fan of your writing and expect to flip between loving and hating the main characters many times before the story is over!

Thank you for such entertaining reads :)