All Comments on 'The Twelve Vitali Ch. 05'

That kiss

I'm not so sure he just kissed her to stake him claim. Maybe it was to for fill part of his fantasy he's got going on.

Ellie this story has me coming back for more. I just love Peri

Really enjoying the pacing and detail you are showing. This is a great read. Can’t wait for the next chapter.

... There was a way to give more than 5* to the rare story that goes beyond excellent to unbelievably awesome! 5* just doesn't seem like enough somehow. Thank you!

I wish she'd just run off with Pete and live happily ever after. He's the most decent man in both of these stories.

Charles and Andie, Carlos and Louisa, dare we hope for a bit of backstory in future chapters?

The back story for the couples in the Donati Family is detailed in the first series. :)

Good writing should take you on a journey or evoke emotions. I had quit a few reading this installment- hope and sadness being the main two. Hope for Cat - sadness for Cat and Ricco. I like complexity in characters, and you usually write some good ones. Looking forward to the next chapter

Good one started Ellie. You really are a master of intrigue and what goes through a woman's mind. Great fun. Thanks for sharing.

So I didn't read the story but felt the need to mention that I think that the Twelve Vitali would make a fantastic band name.

I just reread all of The Twelve Tables again because of this story. Wonderfully done again. But then I reread all of this one. Reading them all in a row was awesome. I love how strong Cat is. I hope she chews his butt well about using the kiss just to show up his brother. I hope Rocco suffers for having let her go. So exciting. Can’t wait to see what is next

After seeing that you were working on a new "twelve" story, I went back and re-read The Twelve Tables, just to refresh myself. It had been a while since reading the first Twelve the first three times. Thanks for bringing in characters from the earlier story. You made me fall in love with them, and it's lovely to see them again.

I was liking this story before Matt's fantasy about tying her down :(. yeah, yeah, I know it's supposed to signify her trust in him in BDSM relationships, but knowing how abusive her ex was, she shouldn't be even asked to submit by a guy if he really loves her...

Ellie, please, we need the story of Doctor Pete, the eternal bachelor.