The Twelve Vitali Ch. 14

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"I've worked so hard to get her to trust and love me in return. Now I am just supposed to roll over and leave her to the mercy of family law and tradition? I hate this trial and what it entails. I hate that you have some expectation that you will become part of our lives and our love. I hate that I have no control over anything that is happening right now, and most of all I hate that I may have to walk away from everyone I love, my family and friends, to have the life I want with Cat. I meant what I said, I won't stand by as Oracle and watch you marry her, even if only for public perception!" Matteo said adamantly.

"Well, fuck!" Ricco repeated Matteo's earlier statement.

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Stop already

@grrrr your consistent complaint after every chapter is so repetitive. If you don't like it, go fly a kite, change a tire, or something more worthwhile. Your criticism is similar to a whiny kid. Get over it and go somewhere else if you don't like it. Easy solution.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
grrrr

with a writer as great as Ellie, it is impossible not to get sucked into the story. There are so many ups and downs for me in every chapter! I keep finding many upsetting details, such as Matt's disregard for the fact that Cat is uncomfortable going braless and not being allowed to put her hair up in hot weather - why the hell is he so inconsiderate, why are his aesthetical preferences above her physical comforts? I had some hopes that they would stand up against the antiquated traditions and would not allow Cat to be fucked by strangers during the trial, and yet everyone is acting like it is unavoidable and normal, no one even raised a question about it or tried to negotiate and acknowledge just how totally unnecessary the sexual part of the trial is for people like Peri and Cat. Matt is having a hard time thinking of sharing with Ricco, but has no problem sharing with strangers at Battaglia??? And Cat's inner thought process dismissing women's rights as political correctness was just too callous of the author. What a disappointment this world is for a person of different sensibilities who nevertheless gets sucked into the whole thing due to Ellie's talents...

tany830tany830over 6 years ago
Patiently impatient

I adore every single story you have posted and eagerly await the next in this series! I am as I always am patiently impatient awaiting the nextra chapter that will enthrall and delight me! ♡♡♡

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
love your stories

love your stories...keep checking everyday for updates, please don't keep me waiting too long .

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Thank you!

I just read your 2018 greeting and want to a - return the greeting and wish you your best year yet in 2018 B- Congratulate you on being cancer free. I have several family members who have battled cancer and have seen the strength and courage it takes c - Thank you for the incredible stories you write d - encourage you to take your time and enjoy your life. As much as your stories enhance our lives, I’m sure all of your fans join me in saying whatever you can give, whenever you can give it is more than enough. Thank you Ellie

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