The Twelve Vitali Ch. 32

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"What do you want, Giovanni?" Matteo hissed in a deathly quiet voice filled with rage.

"I have already told you what I want. I also want your father to accompany you!" he sneered. "I know the monster is there listening, make sure he is on the plane. It is a shame that the other monster is missing, but then it will be enough to know he suffers for his stupidity. As if the Tater involve themselves in worldly business. You have one hour to be in the air again, Matteo, failure to comply will cause you far more pain that you are prepared for!"

The screen went blank, and Matteo shook with rage, using all his self-restraint not to throw the phone across the tarmac.

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xelliebabexxelliebabexover 5 years agoAuthor
Dear Gypsy

You may have found a lack of continuity on my behalf with Mario and Giovanni.

Kari was Zachary's wife from the beginning :)

The new table of twelve has started if you check my page there will eventually be a whole new table for you to muse over. The first part of the prologue for the 12 Zenati is up as of today :)

GypsytrampGypsytrampover 5 years ago
I need clarification please! Help me, Ellie! :)

Since when is Mario Giovanni’s son? In an earlier chapter they were described as cousins. I do think having them be father/son makes more sense as to why Mario would go along with all of this craziness but it would also mean that Vanessa is marrying her first cousin and I don’t think even the twelve tables would go for that. They do some crazy shit but I’m sure they’re aware of the perils of inbreeding (especially as there had been some concern as to the legitimacy of Maria’s children). Also, knowing Gio is batshit crazy since infancy, why the hell would they make him head of the Watchmen? I get that they promised him a spot on the Martino table but the prudent thing to do would’ve been to give him one of the men-at-arms spots. The men of the tables make me want to face palm at least once per chapter.

In other news, who the fuck is Kari? She’s repeatedly described as part of Cat’s younger women group which means she’s someone’s wife but I can’t find any reference as to whose. Jacobi is the only married brother so it must be one of the cousins but which? She just randomly showed up when Cat first met with the men girls wives club and I’m lost as to who she is. Sebastian’s maybe? Now that I think of it, I think it comes up in the chapter at the end when Cat kicks *spoiler* out but until then, I’m lost. Which, hey, I can admit isn’t necessarily anything new.

I love rereading your stories when I can’t sleep at night. It’s like visiting old friends. Hope you’re well, Ellie.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
And who is Giovanni?

I agree...too many names to keep track of

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Confused... need clarification

A little confused. In your story, According to the letters sent to Cat it was Cat’s father & paternal grandfather that we’re related to the Tatar family. however now the Tatar family is saying it was her maternal grandmother. That doesn’t make sense because she new her maternal grandmother. she didn’t know Katinka which was Sava’s aunt whom he said was Cat’s maternal grandmother. in the story Sava had said Katinka, her daughter & granddaughter. Can you add some clarification please?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Great cliffhanger!

Wow, what an ending. Thank you for your stories. I also would love to see the stories of the twelve tables in an ebook :-)

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