All Comments on 'The Twins'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Too long...

since we've heard from you Harding. Glad to see this new story.

Not as engrossing as your previous works, but really picking up pace towards the end.

Crying out for a continuation... I'm not especially a fan of gay sex scenes, but in your hands, and with this story set up, I really hope there's a 2nd (or more) installment.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
glad your back

good start needs to be taken further

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Thanks to everyone who has read my stories, and for all the comments both good and bad. The good I will obviously believe completely, the bad I will try and take on board and improve. If you've not read any of my stories before you'll find they follow a few standard tropes. ...