All Comments on 'The Twins'

Great story, especially for a first timer! I felt like it started off kind of suddenly, meaning there was no real build up or back story, or even a description of what the girls look like, but that aside it was pretty good. Keep it up! I'm looking forward to another installment.

It is really a turn off to me

Yawnfest!!!!If it was your first then still boring. C'mon where's the fun, where's the passion? Where's the imagination and the descritpions....NEXT..

This is good for a first time story, I agree with some of the other comments, that there could be more build up, but I found it hot. I would like to read a follow up to this one, with them exploring some more.

This story was HOT!! You should make more.

I'm interested in seeing where you take this should you decide to continue with the story.

So fucking hot my girl friend and I acted this out, sucking and using toys till we passed out from the insane level of pleasure we reached, when we recovered I plunged my cock into her and we fucked each other senseless. having recovered, my girlfriend phoned her best friend and got her to come around for some fun, I spent most of the rest of the night fisting my cock while the girls got it on (fantastic) finally nearly exhausted I got to suck and fuck my girls best friend. we have since acted this out on a regular basis. Cunt lapping sex maniac lanc's uk

A lovely lead-up to wonderfully hot action! Love it!

Wonderful. This was very well written.

Hope you come back and write a follow up someday.

Perhaps they could try to do a bdsm scene or make a sex tape just for the naughtiness of it.