All Comments on 'The Twins Take Over Ch. 05'

by lilgirlsix

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shytxgrlshytxgrlalmost 12 years ago

Oh how I hope the girls open a can of whoop ass on him.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Nooooooooooooooooooo

i hope the four of them turn on him and the other join in

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Well Done

Another exciting chapter. Love your stories.

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxalmost 12 years ago
ladies and gentlemen

this is the OH SHIT chapter. This is when the set up comes for awesome....

I wonder which chapter will be the SHIT JUST HIT THE FAN chapter? lol

AhzureDragonAhzureDragonalmost 12 years ago
Bring it on

This is going to be a big fight and I am betting on the twins and the panther ladies. Hope the girls get the last swipe at the retched Alpha. Go team Carr!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Dont mess with a Cougar's boytoy

Being a woman in her 40;s if someone tried to part me from one of those hotties with stamina and bodies that don't quit. I would gut them, Dire wolf be damned.

ChurosChurosalmost 12 years ago
Rawr >.<

You don't know what's coming your way Rolf, hohoho! The Baxter pack is on its way!!

Thank you for the update ^-^

EuphoriaSlam69EuphoriaSlam69almost 12 years ago
The Baxter pack ROCKS!

And the twins with their little pussies are the ultimate! I can't wait to see who you mate Anneke with! Go team lilgirlsix! You are an extraordinary writer lilgirlsix!

MizTMizTalmost 12 years ago
Leading

you are leading me towards a fight and I have to wonder what little tidbits you are going to share now. The last fight had Carr and his "team" finding out important facts along the way, will you do that again because I really liked it as much as I hated it. You have continued to blend all if the characters into one seamless story. While at the same time you are expanding the characters in the Jensen Pack. At least it appears we will get some inside help from the Jensen Pack. Let the plans for the battle begin........

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Love it

Love your work you tell the story so well, without rushing it. Thanks for a great read

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Hot Dame I Need One of These Twins

talk about a story

i cant wait for the next

finished the wolfs pet an hour ago

had to read this

im tired But boy was it worth it

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Great

Love your stories well written

maxd01maxd01almost 11 years ago

You know you have some really evil bad guys and I can tell that since everytime one is mentioned I imagine someone walking in, going 'counsel business' pulls a gun and blows their head off.

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