by Antonio_y_Cleopatra
Really enjoy the steady pacing of this storyline - very hot, great set up, nice moving through the progression. Great writing and anxious to see more!
I’m looking forward to the next challenge they are offered. There is something both erotic and scary about being fucked with an audience, especially when someone in that audience is your spouse.
Well, I'm still leery of this society of the "beautiful people" "high achievers" and their tale of how they will help Traci and Justin with all aspects of life and relationships. Of course then I realize that I'm too busy trying to put this story in terms of realism and all the pitfalls that could bring.
So now buying into story as told....the road our couple is on is indeed quite erotic. The intimate scenes are all very well written and lead right in to the next conversations about joining this society. Interview scenes also well done. I do look forward to reading the next section with the loving couple each performing in front of the group.
I feel certain that both will let go and completely immerse themselves into the action.
I hope both of the leads have SOME sort of doubts at some point; they're a little too trusting of this situation and are almost too into it.