All Comments on 'The Unusual Succubus'

A little editing or more proofing would help with some omitted words, but it was still fun and erotic!

I hope this spawns a sequel, or even a series. I'm curious as to whether the succubus is just after sex, or there's more to it than that.

After reading this, I want to know why Mona is so unusual. Also I'm anxious to see what her plans are. How long can she keep Rupert strung along? Is she just after sex, or something more? How does sex with Mona change Elizabeth?

And okay, more lesbian seductions would be fun too.

I can see this expanding out to several stories. More Elizabeth with Mona, Lauren with Mona, Mona and Rupert, Rupert forced to watch Mona with either Elizabeth or Lauren, Mona with Lauren and a friend, etc.