All Comments on 'The Utter Humiliation of Penny Love'

This would sound great, read by Geoffrey Rush in Quills. Now, all we need is to get a Venus in furs.

Loved the humorous undertone.

"Considering how fat Mr. Keller was, his cock was surprisingly slender and of only average length" .

Very funny.

Loved the title also.

Cinq points. More more more!

The was great Seth! Thank you for writing this story, I love it! I love everything about it! Penny's life will never be the same :)

That made me 'come over all unnecessary' as my old Mum used to say!

Thank you for bringing us this super sexy story - 5 *s and more, please!

traci

love it, hope to read more stories like this! the ending was a little corny but fully loved the rest of the story.

that was great any chance of some more of claire?

Humiliation was intense, I really liked the bag on the head part it brought back some long ago memories!

This is a great story, the characters and action were unusually well written. I'd love to read more about Penni's further adventures with Xavi, the vagrants, and Mr Keller. A bit more description in the scene with Bobby would have been helpful but as it stands you did a excellent jon capturing her and Xavi's reactions and feelings. Definitely a five star effort. Hope you continue exploring Zpenny's new world!

i loved it my cock throbbed all the way through and came twice

will there be a second part or another story like this

please please rigt a second part

I've read most of your stories, and enjoyed them, but this, along with Clare&theCharityShop, are my favorites. I hope you write more about Penny, and her adventures. She's a beguiling girl that could have a great many further adventures.

well done. Thoughtful engrossing tale - as usual

Sir; your talents are wasted on these mind numbing Exhib/Voyeur type contributions, casting pearls of wisdom before literary swine, when you could be writing an academic thesis to rival anyone of the American Masters! EG: [Masters & Johnston or Mark Twain] Please devote a brief time to the 'NMCF' Fetish, along with practical assistance from an elderly 'BDSM' Mistress, who's 'been there and done that' for the last 60 years at least? Some of the best years of my life were spent as a Submissive, until I converted Master Kent to MY point of view [humiliating him by 'Milking' him before all my like minded lady friends] until Kent was totally free of Testosterone, in an expensive Medical Rest Home where he eventually died with a grateful smile. [ Happy to have me there, on his demise?]

Many thanks to the anonymous reader who urged 1* scores.

If it hadn't been for you rousing my curiosity about how bad this story was supposed to be, I'd have passed it by and missed out on giving it the 5* it so richly deserves!

This story goes beyond reluctance and humiliation. It is about rape and should be removed by the site owners.

A delight as virtuous Penny Love careens from one hilarious humiliation to another, while finding that her beloved and her friends are unfaithful. The one quirk is the male being obese. When it's over she's a great cocksucker and enjoys fucking.

Xavier Was Rewarded At The End, But, Penny Learned Submission For Sex Made Her VERY Satisfied! This Reader Was VERY Satisfied, Also!!! Great Writing!

Serial humiliation. And serial sex.

Read this story many times and thanks to the quality of the writing and the execution it still holds up. very well done.

at the bitter end life and friendships are shattered. TK U MLJ LV NV

Great story on humiliation, forced sex and blackmail.

I found the story line to be plausible and sexy. Not an easy combination to achieve. Yet, in spite of the advanced vocabulary, the grammar needs a lot of work. It is undeniably a cock stiffening story.

There is a lot to love about this story, assuming you love forced sex and humiliation. I confess that I was hoping for even more guys to show up while Penny was getting pounded in the woods, guys that would ignore the prohibition on cumming inside her. Then later, when they encounter Mr. Keller outside his shop, he'd be taking his dog out for a walk. With Penny's cum-filled vagina leaking generously, the dog would naturally be drawn to her smelly gooey crotch and further humiliation would ensue. Just a suggestion if you were ever to consider an additional chapter or a minor re-write. Even without, this was a terrific read!

The fantasy of a 13-year old boy. Too bad, because this could have been a great story!

Your's are the BEST!! Just make them little more slowly submissive..

Please continue this! She’s still naked in Xavier’s house, maybe someone comes home so Penny has to hide and ends up locked outside on another naked adventure.

I loved this story. It is refreshing to read a story with a strong ending. I must say that I had wished that Xavi had found the moral and physical strength to jump in and save Penny from being raped.