All Comments on 'The Valentine Trap'

Well composed and a beautifully gentle tale.

What a sweet compact tale for Valentines. This is a very good story. Thank you for writing it T.

So short and yet a lovely little trap! Well done!

Sometimes the youngsters really need a little help!

Tender and sweet, reminiscent of adolescent love. The shyness, the awkwardness, the sense of being on the precipice of discovery. . . you captured it well!

Well done, Tarakin. I'm impressed. Best of luck in the contest.

Very nice!

Good job my friend. Hope you do very well. It was a lovely sweet tale.

Best of luck my friend

What a nice little story, capturing the nervousness and insecurity of youth but with a nice little twist. You should be proud of this effort and I'm sure it will do well in the contest for you.

But then, I didn't have you writing it for me. Lovely story, T. Can't wait for more.

It's over? Couldn't you do just a couple more paragraphs? :) It was really cute and sweet Tarakin! I wanted more.

You should write a part two to this story as an introduction for Cynthia's story. It was a beautifully romantic story that captured, perfectly, the ups and downs of young love.